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  • #1

    Freestyle.

    Some shit i just wrote out.

    Live life without a question, no depression no aggression
    My confession, dreams of being rich id my obsession
    Until i make it this is my succession
    I post it to the world to help progression
    Its just depressin', yall mainly lack expression
    Im just expressin' talent so you dont have to question
    Who's the best, i am. No guessin'
    Its crazy cause Im white and its just a blessin'
    To be testin' ya because I am a white kid
    Learn to rap before ya crash and burn on the mic kid
    Build yourselves a time machine and go back to the 90s
    To take some lessons with them legends before your blind me

    Ehhhh. Kinda tired, and really faded. Hope yall like it..
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  • #2
    Re: Freestyle.

    Originally posted by skimdudee420
    Some shit i just wrote out.

    Live life without a question, no depression no aggression
    My confession, dreams of being rich id my obsession
    Until i make it this is my succession
    I post it to the world to help progression
    Its just depressin', yall mainly lack expression
    Im just expressin' talent so you dont have to question
    Who's the best, i am. No guessin'
    Its crazy cause Im white and its just a blessin'
    To be testin' ya because I am a white kid
    Learn to rap before ya crash and burn on the mic kid
    Build yourselves a time machine and go back to the 90s
    To take some lessons with them legends before your blind me

    Ehhhh. Kinda tired, and really faded. Hope yall like it..
    Didn't understand "id" in the second line, a typo obviously but couldn't think what it was supposed to be..?
    Using white two times so close sounded weird to me, and I think you might've been able to find a better word than blind. It was good though, I liked it.
    “Nature has wisely judged that the distinction of ranks, the peace and order of society, would rest more securely upon the plain and palpable difference of birth and fortune, than upon the invisible and often uncertain difference of wisdom and virtue.

    -Adam Smith, Theory of Moral Sentiments

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    • #3
      Re: Freestyle.

      Originally posted by trillphill
      Originally posted by skimdudee420
      Some shit i just wrote out.

      Live life without a question, no depression no aggression
      My confession, dreams of being rich id my obsession
      Until i make it this is my succession
      I post it to the world to help progression
      Its just depressin', yall mainly lack expression
      Im just expressin' talent so you dont have to question
      Who's the best, i am. No guessin'
      Its crazy cause Im white and its just a blessin'
      To be testin' ya because I am a white kid
      Learn to rap before ya crash and burn on the mic kid
      Build yourselves a time machine and go back to the 90s
      To take some lessons with them legends before your blind me

      Ehhhh. Kinda tired, and really faded. Hope yall like it..
      Didn't understand "id" in the second line, a typo obviously but couldn't think what it was supposed to be..?
      Using white two times so close sounded weird to me, and I think you might've been able to find a better word than blind. It was good though, I liked it.

      It is supposed to be
      "is"
      95% right
      Tha Carter Franchise <3

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      • #4
        Re: Freestyle.

        Originally posted by YoungMoneyEnt
        Originally posted by trillphill
        Originally posted by skimdudee420
        Some shit i just wrote out.

        Live life without a question, no depression no aggression
        My confession, dreams of being rich id my obsession
        Until i make it this is my succession
        I post it to the world to help progression
        Its just depressin', yall mainly lack expression
        Im just expressin' talent so you dont have to question
        Who's the best, i am. No guessin'
        Its crazy cause Im white and its just a blessin'
        To be testin' ya because I am a white kid
        Learn to rap before ya crash and burn on the mic kid
        Build yourselves a time machine and go back to the 90s
        To take some lessons with them legends before your blind me

        Ehhhh. Kinda tired, and really faded. Hope yall like it..
        Didn't understand "id" in the second line, a typo obviously but couldn't think what it was supposed to be..?
        Using white two times so close sounded weird to me, and I think you might've been able to find a better word than blind. It was good though, I liked it.

        It is supposed to be
        "is"
        95% right

        What do you mean 95% right?

        And I guess thanks Trill? Hahaha

        And it was supposed to be "is"...

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        • #5
          Re: Freestyle.

          Or I could lie to you and say it was strait fiya youh sickkkkk nigggggaaaaa perfectionnnn but I don't think that would help at all.
          “Nature has wisely judged that the distinction of ranks, the peace and order of society, would rest more securely upon the plain and palpable difference of birth and fortune, than upon the invisible and often uncertain difference of wisdom and virtue.

          -Adam Smith, Theory of Moral Sentiments

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          • #6
            Re: Freestyle.

            Originally posted by skimdudee420
            Originally posted by YoungMoneyEnt
            Originally posted by trillphill
            Originally posted by skimdudee420
            Some shit i just wrote out.

            Live life without a question, no depression no aggression
            My confession, dreams of being rich id my obsession
            Until i make it this is my succession
            I post it to the world to help progression
            Its just depressin', yall mainly lack expression
            Im just expressin' talent so you dont have to question
            Who's the best, i am. No guessin'
            Its crazy cause Im white and its just a blessin'
            To be testin' ya because I am a white kid
            Learn to rap before ya crash and burn on the mic kid
            Build yourselves a time machine and go back to the 90s
            To take some lessons with them legends before your blind me

            Ehhhh. Kinda tired, and really faded. Hope yall like it..
            Didn't understand "id" in the second line, a typo obviously but couldn't think what it was supposed to be..?
            Using white two times so close sounded weird to me, and I think you might've been able to find a better word than blind. It was good though, I liked it.

            It is supposed to be
            "is"
            95% right

            What do you mean 95% right?

            And I guess thanks Trill? Hahaha

            And it was supposed to be "is"...
            Lol I said it was supposed to be
            "is" and I was saying im not 100% positive thats what it is but im pretty sure (95%) you ment "is"
            Tha Carter Franchise <3

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            • #7
              Re: Freestyle.

              Oh hahah, yeah. I meant 'is'.

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              • #8
                Re: Freestyle.

                Originally posted by trillphill
                Or I could lie to you and say it was strait fiya youh sickkkkk nigggggaaaaa perfectionnnn but I don't think that would help at all.
                we need more people like you on here

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                • #9
                  Re: Freestyle.

                  shit's aight

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                  • #10
                    Re: Freestyle.

                    Originally posted by trillphill
                    Or I could lie to you and say it was strait fiya youh sickkkkk nigggggaaaaa perfectionnnn but I don't think that would help at all.
                    Nah, i was thanking you for the feedback. Just wasnt sure if it was good or bad hahah.

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                    • #11
                      Re: Freestyle.

                      Nice nigga.
                      Liked the white kid verses.

                      8/10
                      Keep it up..

                      Smoke good, eat good.
                      Only fuck a bitch if her throat good, feet good.
                      Just bought a fleetwood, and imma put some D&#39;s on that bitch.
                      Looking like i gotta diamond disease on my wrist.

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