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  • Playground Prodigies-In The City

    LimeLinx - Preview - In The City.mp3

    ANY FEEDBACK POSITIVE/NEGATIVE IS MUCH APPRECIATED!!

    LimeLinx - Preview - In The City.mp3

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    Re: Playground Prodigies-In The City

    Hook is dope, but not diggin the guy talking underneath the hook; not sure if that's supposed to be some doubling or something but it sounds like two different hooks on top of each other with the autotune one trying to mask the other one. Not sure, but I'd say take out the bottom adlibs. You should try using some light autotune on your verses because your flow is quite fluctuating as far as pitch and sometimes you hit some notes that seem like they don't fit. Flow could be cleaned up too, sounds like it's draggin in a few places, not quite on flow with the rest of the beat. Not really sure how to explain it but it just doesn't seem to meld right with the beat with the rhythm of your delivery. It's a cool track, it just needs some polishing up in a couple different places to really let it groove
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      Re: Playground Prodigies-In The City

      Appreciate it man!!

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