Solace Feat. Sentus & DerdyPK- Feels Like Forever

[Sentus]

Track I did for two of my homies, I'm on the third verse which starts at 2:34

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[akkucc]

Re: Solace Feat. Sentus & DerdyPK- Feels Like Forever

everything is great man you went ham over the beat flow lyrics all good keep it up.

[Coleon]

Re: Solace Feat. Sentus & DerdyPK- Feels Like Forever

I cried hard.

[Sentus]

Re: Solace Feat. Sentus & DerdyPK- Feels Like Forever

I cried hard.

Omar was that bad?

[ATLien666]

Re: Solace Feat. Sentus & DerdyPK- Feels Like Forever

Flow - Was nice, but your voice does not match this beat at all. But the flow was good, but a few times, it kinda fell off. 3.9/5

Lyrics - I actually replayed your verse 3 times. It was deep as fuck. You did a really nice job, like, you could tell it was emotional. Rapping your heart out, huh? 5/5

Overall - 4/5

[MC_Crary]

Re: Solace Feat. Sentus & DerdyPK- Feels Like Forever

I think you sounded good on this beat but I feel like the flow was a little too stretch out. Some bars didn't flow as well, I feel Like maybe lacking a few syllables in some lines. The lyrics were beautiful. You could feel the real in the flow, just the delivery could've been better. Keep up the improvement man, you're getting better every verse I hear from you.

[Sentus]

Re: Solace Feat. Sentus & DerdyPK- Feels Like Forever

Thanks for listening guys

[tjbdef]

Re: Solace Feat. Sentus & DerdyPK- Feels Like Forever

I really liked this, and IMO your verse was the best. keep it up!

[Sentus]

Re: Solace Feat. Sentus & DerdyPK- Feels Like Forever

Thanks man, I'll try