"down to earth" rap by lil mak(feat dj undefined)

[lil mak]

well this is the rap i promised to everyone on my old post,so here it goes and tell me what you think!

-lil mak-
this girl so fine but she dont know it
drops it so low she makin all the other girls show it
she dont give a fuck what anyone says,doesnt let it get to her head
I say she got it goin on,but then she looks like somethins wrong
and thats when she says im just like any other girl,nothin special to see
thars when i say

-both-
when we step up in the club you drop it so low
all these people breakin their necks just to see
so dont say you aint close to perfect
and to top it all off,youre so down to earth
-dj undefined-
i know i aint the only one in your fan club
keep us all wantin more,never gonna quit
in the club,you a big hit
all them dudes wanna get with ya,but im the lucky one
shinin brighter then the sun,i know your the one

-lil mak-

yeah,before i get started,step off this beat so retarded
so imma take ya uptown downtown all around just to make you happy
i remember this forever,runnin through my mind all the time
never gonna leave you my girl,ill do anything to keep ya forever till forever ends
which i hope it never does

-both-
when we step up in the club you drop it so low
all these people breakin their necks just to see
so dont say you aint close to perfect
and to top it all off,youre so down to earth

-lil mak-
i wanna be with you for infinity
ive already got us where we need to be
so lets make some memories
yeah baby,just you and me...




alright,thats the song,i hope you like it,and tell me if you want to have another by me posted!

---------- Post added at 09:25 AM ---------- Previous post was at 07:29 AM ----------

anybody like it

[ArTC]

Re: "down to earth" rap by lil mak(feat dj undefined)

I liked it, it's quite simple tho you kept it in a really good level. Keep the work up and of course I'd like to have another one.

[lil mak]

Re: "down to earth" rap by lil mak(feat dj undefined)

thanks,i will post another once i get a chance

---------- Post added at 09:55 PM ---------- Previous post was at 09:05 PM ----------

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/wri...tml#post631578

heres the link to my next one called "into eternity by lil mak (with a collab opportunity open)

---------- Post added at 10:59 PM ---------- Previous post was at 09:55 PM ----------

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/wri...tml#post631695

i also wrote a 6ft 7ft remix