Shawn Mays - #TwoNewTracks

[ItzTheRemixShawty!]

Im Back With 2 New Tracks BTW...For Those Of You Who Dont Know Me I AM..Shawn Mays...And OH Yea Mixtape Commin Soon

Extraordinary - Shawn Mays(Ft.J.Payne x Valdrin Lamont)
LimeLinx - Preview - 6) I'm Extraordinary(Ft.Shawn Mays & Valdrin Lamont).mp3 (2nd Verse)

Hustle Hard - Shawn Mays(Ft.J.Payne x Curtis Hollis)
LimeLinx - Preview - HustleHarD(Ft. JPayne & Curtis Hollis).mp3 (2nd Verse)

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[Sentus]

Re: Shawn Mays - #TwoNewTracks

That was amaysing har har har

[sennius]

Re: Shawn Mays - #TwoNewTracks

i like it a lot

[MC_Crary]

Re: Shawn Mays - #TwoNewTracks

It's great to have you back. Your verse on Extraordinary was nothing less of well extraordinary lol. Your flow is perfect and your lyrics are sick man. The "my verses so hot that should be followed by three sixes" line was great, but your finish was nowhere near as great. Last bar drops the verse at least a point. Very such a great verse, it doesn't fit. It comes out too simple.
Now the Hustle Hard verse on the other hand, you killed. The switch up in flow worked for you. More great lyri cs too, you kept it going throughout on this one too.

[ItzTheRemixShawty!]

Re: Shawn Mays - #TwoNewTracks

It's great to have you back. Your verse on Extraordinary was nothing less of well extraordinary lol. Your flow is perfect and your lyrics are sick man. The "my verses so hot that should be followed by three sixes" line was great, but your finish was nowhere near as great. Last bar drops the verse at least a point. Very such a great verse, it doesn't fit. It comes out too simple.
Now the Hustle Hard verse on the other hand, you killed. The switch up in flow worked for you. More great lyri cs too, you kept it going throughout on this one too.

Prociate The Love Homie...And On The Extraordinary Verse The Last Couple Bars I Was Takin A Shot At A Local Guy So The Lines May Not Make Alot Of Sense

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Shawn Mays - #TwoNewTracks

Damn man, you got alot better. I listened to the first track. You had great flow. Your lyrics could be better though. You got some punchlines, but I prefer lyricism.

[YoungMoneyEnt]

Re: Shawn Mays - #TwoNewTracks

Never heard of you or your shit but I like it. I think you have a lot of potential but you haven't put it all together it. Keep making music.