MYKILL - Bitch, I'm In Paris

[mykill]

Bored. Time on my hands. This is what happens.



Download/Stream: Mykill - Bitch, I'm in Paris (N*ggas in Paris Freestyle)

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[MC_Crary]

Re: MYKILL - Bitch, I'm In Paris

Ya'll niggas scared or what? LMI/MMG's back.

[ATLien666]

Re: MYKILL - Bitch, I'm In Paris

Flow - Was pretty nice, at times, your delivery didn't seem that well, so some lines sounded kinda awkward. 3.9/5

Lyrics - "The game's the same blunt, but it's my time to spark it." Niiice as fuck. You had some killer ass lines in there. I liked all the machete persona rhymes you played in here. 4/5

Overall - 4/5

[mykill]

Re: MYKILL - Bitch, I'm In Paris

Flow - Was pretty nice, at times, your delivery didn't seem that well, so some lines sounded kinda awkward. 3.9/5

Lyrics - "The game's the same blunt, but it's my time to spark it." Niiice as fuck. You had some killer ass lines in there. I liked all the machete persona rhymes you played in here. 4/5

Overall - 4/5

thanks bro

[steviemcfly]

Re: MYKILL - Bitch, I'm In Paris

Agree that the delivery is sometimes a bit awkward. If you rehearse more before you record and work on how certain lines flow rhythmically, you could definitely be on something.

[SkJayDubb]

Re: MYKILL - Bitch, I'm In Paris

This Is Ok, Sometimes Your Flow Got Off & That's the only thing that I have anything to say about

I Would LOVE to get that instrumental.

3.5/5 - Flow
4/5 - Lyrics
10/5 - Instrumental

[mykill]

Re: MYKILL - Bitch, I'm In Paris

I Would LOVE to get that instrumental.

Kanye West & Jay-Z- Niggas In Paris (Instrumental)

[yungfamou5]

Re: MYKILL - Bitch, I'm In Paris

Y the fuck i cant never get on a collab? lol jp but this shit is nice i wanted to get on this beat, you shoulda let me come right after you. I tgive the track 4/5 coulda been 5/5 with me on it LOL

[ScHeEzZ]

Re: MYKILL - Bitch, I'm In Paris

this is pretty straight, i haven't heard much of your stuff, but it seemed like you were trying to slow down your words because your natural flow is a lot more fast and intense. the blunt line was straight, but that was the high as far as creative lyricism goes. i'd like to hear a couple joints where you don't hold back, because that's what i'm walking away with here.

[akkucc]

Re: MYKILL - Bitch, I'm In Paris

Your flow is really very good but few times you got offbeat but not so, so for me it is 4/5 and lyrics is also quite good i like few punchlines, so it is like 4.5/5

[DreezyBaby]

Re: MYKILL - Bitch, I'm In Paris

The way you rap on this shit is funny as fuck my nigga, you just killed it with ease. Like people said before your flow is over-riddled and there some lines that you should've moved around. Calm your flow down bro, just chill a little you ripped it tho. Just seems like you're trying to rap the next line before the line before is finished

flow- 3/5
lyrics- 4/5
instro- 4/5

[Sentus]

Re: MYKILL - Bitch, I'm In Paris

I thought you left? lol anyway...

Lyrically it was pretty average for you, I feel like you can do better in that aspect. Your flow was solid the whole time, I didn't hear it slip at all. Your delivery was good, but there were some parts where I thought it could use a little more energy, but it didn't really bring the song down that much. I liked your delivery when you said the blunt/spark it line.