VAiN - Let Your Guard Down

[WRiTESiCKRHYMES]

Found this little gem while i was perusing through my computer. Some old shit Wondering if I could get some feedback on it though. (This is back before I even had my first mic so don't even mention the quality )

Hulkshare.com 09 Let Your Guard Down.mp3


Lyrics:

Let your guard down
Let your guard down for me

Uh, say baby, let your guard down
Can't you see I'm only tryna put this love on you
Yeah, baby, I'll take you on the town
But I can't do it unless you let me through
The gates to your heart, so I'mma have to start
To stunt on all these other guys
I do it for the ultimate prize
To look in your eyes and see the love we share
And see that I'm somewhere in there
Close to the scars
Oh, close to your heart

So close to your heart
So let me in
I'll tower over all the other men
So let me closer than them
And let me put your guard down

Put your guard down
For me

Girl you the safest
Even when you're right here by my side in my arms layin down
Girl you the finest
That's why I wouldn't ever let nobody come around
Say, baby
Since its just you and me and there ain't nobody to watch us now
Say, lady
If you let me in that heart I'mma turn that mothafucka out
Tell me what you want
Tell me what you need
You know I can be
Your everything
So I'mma need you to let your guard down
Oh, let me take ya dress down
Run my fingers through your hair
Have you feelin like the room is spinning round
You feel my breath all on your skin
I ain't gotta tell ya its goin down
I said tonight we're gonna straighten this shit out
There's only one more question: Why the hell are you keepin me out?

You say I couldn't possibly
Understand what you're going through
And I'm just sayin
I can be your man
If you let me do what I need to do
And I know you're scared
Baby girl, you've been drinking
So your visions probably impaired
But what I need is for you to see
That I can be the man that you need me to be
So I'm sayin let your guard down
Let your guard down
And let me be your king without a crown
Before you drown
And I'll catch you if you're falling down.




Feedback:

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post641256

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post641258

[TheDude]

Re: VAiN - Let Your Guard Down

You have any hard tracks?...



For a name WRitESiCKRHYMES .

[WRiTESiCKRHYMES]

Re: VAiN - Let Your Guard Down

You have any hard tracks?...



For a name WRitESiCKRHYMES .

check the rest of tha studio. i think i put some rap tracks in there a little while ago.

[TygaPride]

Re: VAiN - Let Your Guard Down

Uh, say baby, let your guard down
Can't you see I'm only tryna put this love on you
Yeah, baby, I'll take you into town
turn that dumb frown into a smile
But first you gotta let me through your gown
fuck that pussy, let me just pound that pussy
my dick in your mouth, i'll spray like uzi...
goddamn it's hot in here, may as well do squats in here..
have no fear, see no evil, speak no evil, Knievel, eee tho?

could you sing that? I like your voice(nohomo)
sounds like a deeper version of drake's singing voice

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: VAiN - Let Your Guard Down

could you sing that? I like your voice(nohomo)
sounds like a deeper version of drake's singing voice

doesnt really sound deeper than drakes, drakes voice is fairly deep... unless u talkin about a specifiic song

[ScHeEzZ]

Re: VAiN - Let Your Guard Down

i'm diggin it for real, any way you could turn your vocals up a bit though? i have to put my ear to my laptop at some parts.

[A$AP YAMS]

Re: VAiN - Let Your Guard Down

This song reminds me of "Woods" by Bon Iver with a little twist of The Weeknd lol

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: VAiN - Let Your Guard Down

can u please post it without autotune??

thanks

[mykill]

Re: VAiN - Let Your Guard Down

Flow: A
Lyrics: A

Overall: 4.25/5, This is pretty tight! Singing is pretty on point and the lyrics are very fitting. You made a nice spin on the classic Drake track. Nice Work!

[WRiTESiCKRHYMES]

Re: VAiN - Let Your Guard Down

Wow thanks for the feedback guys. I never get feedback like this lol.