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    Re: Faded (Song) - JayDubb (BEST rapper my age)

    Nice!
    your actually a dope youtube artists.
    i like ya stuff.

    Last edited by TheDude; 08-31-2011, 02:02 AM.

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    • #3
      Re: Faded (Song) - JayDubb (BEST rapper my age)

      This is pretty good dude!
      Who Dat Nation!

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        Re: Faded (Song) - JayDubb (BEST rapper my age)

        Flow - Nice ass flow, definitely fuck with it. 4.5/5

        Lyrics - Ehh, kinda scattered. You had some nice lines, I peeped some nice metaphors/similes, but lacked some substance. Seems like you wanted to rap about your progression and then you talked about all the bitches you fucked and whatnot. Wasn't bad at all, just jumped around the subject matter a lot. 3.5/5

        Overall - 4/5

        Dope shit.


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          Re: Faded (Song) - JayDubb (BEST rapper my age)

          Smooth Flow my dude... Good shit.. keep up the good work... Nice rhyme scheme goin' on as well!

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            Re: Faded (Song) - JayDubb (BEST rapper my age)

            Flow - Loved it when you started, and it was pretty consistent and original throughout, props.
            Lyrics - Pretty good, nothing too corny but also nothing too insane. I liked 'em though.
            Other - Beat was dope. Quality seemed like it needs some working on though.
            Other - 4/5.



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