Noble & D-Blaze - Good Fucking Morning. | Mr. FTP - Poppin' X, Smokin' O's Ft Noble

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Noble & D-Blaze - Good Fucking Morning. | Mr. FTP - Poppin' X, Smokin' O's Ft Nob

Don't really feel the second one, but you killed the first one imo

>>>>>>>>

Thanks man!

[DeezyMac]

Re: Noble & D-Blaze - Good Fucking Morning. | Mr. FTP - Poppin' X, Smokin' O's Ft Nob

That first joint might be my favorite Noble track I've heard. Dat beat >> Dat Wordplay >> Going on iTunes.

[MC_Crary]

Re: Noble & D-Blaze - Good Fucking Morning. | Mr. FTP - Poppin' X, Smokin' O's Ft Nob

The first was hittin man. I love your flow on it. Your boy D-Blaze spits a nice verse too. You've found your swag on recent songs. I don't want it to seem like I complimenting you because I'm trying to get a verse from you but these two songs are great man. The lyrcisim in the first one teamed with the improvement in flow makes it one of your best tracks. The second track is nice too, FTP also shows improvement here. Keep up the good work dude.

[bloodysharnin]

Re: Noble & D-Blaze - Good Fucking Morning. | Mr. FTP - Poppin' X, Smokin' O's Ft Nob

The beat to that first song is fucking insane.


The flow and lyrics were dope too. The flow and lyrics of the second verse weren't bad, but they could've been better.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Noble & D-Blaze - Good Fucking Morning. | Mr. FTP - Poppin' X, Smokin' O's Ft Nob

That first joint might be my favorite Noble track I've heard. Dat beat >> Dat Wordplay >> Going on iTunes.

Thanks man. It always makes me happy enough when people dig my music enough to put it on their iTunes!

The first was hittin man. I love your flow on it. Your boy D-Blaze spits a nice verse too. You've found your swag on recent songs. I don't want it to seem like I complimenting you because I'm trying to get a verse from you but these two songs are great man. The lyrcisim in the first one teamed with the improvement in flow makes it one of your best tracks. The second track is nice too, FTP also shows improvement here. Keep up the good work dude.

Hell yeah, my homie D-Blaze went in haha. And I was just telling another friend of mine that I feel like I'm "finding myself" on the mic, so I feel you on that. Appreciate it man, I PM'd you back btw.

The beat to that first song is fucking insane.


The flow and lyrics were dope too. The flow and lyrics of the second verse weren't bad, but they could've been better.

The beat is from a Roscoe song called "Good Fucking Night". But he was stupid on the song and didn't do it justice, so I figured me and my boy would haha. Thanks for checking it out.

[Artille]

Re: Noble & D-Blaze - Good Fucking Morning. | Mr. FTP - Poppin' X, Smokin' O's Ft Nob

I thought the beat to the first song was insane. You opened it nicely, but honestly your friend gets the spotlight on this one. Nice song overall.

The second song was alright, the verses were average from both of you.

Keep it up, bro!

[Jewazi]

Re: Noble & D-Blaze - Good Fucking Morning. | Mr. FTP - Poppin' X, Smokin' O's Ft Nob

I like it, keep up the good work

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Noble & D-Blaze - Good Fucking Morning. | Mr. FTP - Poppin' X, Smokin' O's Ft Nob

I thought the beat to the first song was insane. You opened it nicely, but honestly your friend gets the spotlight on this one. Nice song overall.

The second song was alright, the verses were average from both of you.

Keep it up, bro!

Respect man!

I like it, keep up the good work

Thanks brah!

[ScHeEzZ]

Re: Noble & D-Blaze - Good Fucking Morning. | Mr. FTP - Poppin' X, Smokin' O's Ft Nob

This song was done today. I'm on first verse, and my homeboy on the 2nd verse.

Bitch you know it's Noble, yeah I'm bout to spit some sick shit
Life in the fast lane, your girl control the stick shift
So get this, get that, get back, and switch swag's
I come in, with six sacks, full of sick hash
I'm ripped as, a group of hippy's smoking in the seventies
Got soo much pine like I just cut down eleven tree's
Y'all telling me to kill this shit, it's kinda like your begging me
I'm going in, but after me, well that's Devin P
You ain't telling me shit, but I am just informing you
All about that fire, like I stay with the mortar crew
Your short of two, cents, get ripped, too rare for your presence
Your crew's shit, we sick, its not fair for you contestants
And it's a blessing, I'm on a miracle high
My spirit is fly, you can tell by lyrics I write
And sorry to the haters, I must be killing you guys
And the reason I be doing this, the realness in rhymes
And I'm too fucking based, it brings a tear to your eye
And I'm killin' all you bitches, that's a tear to the side
And I'm too fucking based, it brings a tear to your eye
And I'm killin' all you bitches, that's a tear to the side

This one was completed yesterday. I'm on second verse.

Poppin' X & smokin' O's, that's just how the story goes
But I'm so fucked up, you don't need to worry though
But now I'm back up on my shit with this shit with a fury flow
Fuck the cops, and fuck the feds, and fuck all of them jury hoes
Fuck 'em all, you think you a rapper? Now that's bullshit
$20 mic, now that's a full spliff
And I burn at least a few a day
And it's of that mothafuckin' dank, mufucka you been ripped
And the way I stay with mollie, you would think that that's my new bitch
But she do shit, make me feel so clueless
So I sit back, load the bong, then I take a few hits
You ain't 'bout this lifestyle, boy, you fuckin' foolish

Feedback #1
Feedback #2

overall, the first was pretty good. lyrically, or punchline wise, you've got a few reaches and a couple of lines that have been said ("sick shit/ girl control stick shift/"), but a couple of others would have some real potential with a bit of a better delivery. your flow started off on point, SPOT on point, and it would switch up a couple of times in the beginning so it had me guessing and excited to see where you were going, but toward around the seventh bar you went for the "play-it-safe" flow, which is cool, but not after we heard you going off in the beginning ("get this, get that, get back, sswitch swags" lines). i do dig and appreciate your multi-syllabic flow, as a lot of artists can't do that. it shows real depth, and if anything, an education. the beat is dope, and besides a couple of things that bother me (pet peeves, really) it has some serious potential.

not a fan of your second one, but i loved the "$20 dollar mic..." line and one preceding that. your flow fell off more than a couple of times, and the verse suffered pretty hard due to stretched lines in some places. the delivery could be picked up quite a bit, as well.

you got crazy talent bro, looking forward to your stuff.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Noble & D-Blaze - Good Fucking Morning. | Mr. FTP - Poppin' X, Smokin' O's Ft Nob

overall, the first was pretty good. lyrically, or punchline wise, you've got a few reaches and a couple of lines that have been said ("sick shit/ girl control stick shift/"), but a couple of others would have some real potential with a bit of a better delivery. your flow started off on point, SPOT on point, and it would switch up a couple of times in the beginning so it had me guessing and excited to see where you were going, but toward around the seventh bar you went for the "play-it-safe" flow, which is cool, but not after we heard you going off in the beginning ("get this, get that, get back, sswitch swags" lines). i do dig and appreciate your multi-syllabic flow, as a lot of artists can't do that. it shows real depth, and if anything, an education. the beat is dope, and besides a couple of things that bother me (pet peeves, really) it has some serious potential.

not a fan of your second one, but i loved the "$20 dollar mic..." line and one preceding that. your flow fell off more than a couple of times, and the verse suffered pretty hard due to stretched lines in some places. the delivery could be picked up quite a bit, as well.

you got crazy talent bro, looking forward to your stuff.

I've never heard any song with a line like 'yo girl control the stick shift' before. I know the line isn't incredible by any means. Just something to bring the listeners into the song and let them vibe, then get lyrical while still stayin' fly. Ya heard?


Thanks though.