akkucc written in the stars remix

[mykill]

Re: akkucc written in the stars remix

Akkuc // Flow: C- // Lyrics: C-
Harry Weezy // Overall: D

Overall: 2/5, That singing is off key, off beat, and sounds like they used a PC mic. Ak you sound clearer in this song. You really need to work on your lyricism, in the fact that most of your lines are broken english and if you really want to be taken seriously in the rap game you gotta have some more coherant thoughts in your verses. Some of it can be rememdied with just adding a simple "the" to the sentence. Like this line: "so my time is gonna came and the clock is running tik-tik,". Or using the right word. Instead of using "make" you should do: "yes i love rihanna and i want to have an affair,". How's that?

[harry_weezy]

Re: akkucc written in the stars remix

Akkuc // Flow: C- // Lyrics: C-
Harry Weezy // Overall: D

Overall: 2/5, That singing is off key, off beat, and sounds like they used a PC mic. Ak you sound clearer in this song. You really need to work on your lyricism, in the fact that most of your lines are broken english and if you really want to be taken seriously in the rap game you gotta have some more coherant thoughts in your verses. Some of it can be rememdied with just adding a simple "the" to the sentence. Like this line: "so my time is gonna came and the clock is running tik-tik,". Or using the right word. Instead of using "make" you should do: "yes i love rihanna and i want to have an affair,". How's that?

yeah bro you are right we have used PC mike we are now buying good mike to make it better quality and also i want to do hard with my singing.
thanks!!

[KidComet]

Re: akkucc written in the stars remix

My God, this is fantastic!

Flow- Everything on point!
Lyrics- Very good, not predicatble, very diverse!

Love it man!

[MC_Crary]

Re: akkucc written in the stars remix

So do people really think this good or is this the cruelest joke in Studio history?

[Z!Greatest]

Re: akkucc written in the stars remix

That hook on the harry veezy version left me speechless, I'll say that much.

[harry_weezy]

Re: akkucc written in the stars remix

My God, this is fantastic!

Flow- Everything on point!
Lyrics- Very good, not predicatble, very diverse!

Love it man!

thanks bro...