RayZor - ATL Freestyle (Dedicated To All The Haters)

[RaYZoR]

This is a freestyle remix that I recorded about 3 months ago.
Nothing on this remix was rehearsed and therefore may not make sense.

But it is a freestyle remix to Wiz Khalifa's ATL freestyle.
Check it out.

RayZor - ATL Freestyle

Feedback:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post655045
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...and-unnyy.html

[MC_Crary]

Re: RayZor - ATL Freestyle (Dedicated To All The Haters)

So let's be honest. This isn't really good at all. Maybe if you took time out to think about your lyrics and write them down it would sound better. I don't know how serious you are about making music but if you would like to be, a new mic would be a good investment. Also learning about mixing and mastering. There's a couple of helpful posts in the older pages of this forum if you'd like to learn about that.

[ATLien666]

Re: RayZor - ATL Freestyle (Dedicated To All The Haters)

I really, really, really hope that this is a freestyle and this wasn't written, if it was written, shame on you. If it wasn't, then ehh.

But first off, stop sayin' nigga all the time. Then stop freestyling. Write down your lyrics. That is all.

Not trying to be mean, but why did you put this out? Was it for promotion of your blog?

[DreezyBaby]

Re: RayZor - ATL Freestyle (Dedicated To All The Haters)

lol this is funny. Sounds like you're just joking bro? Idk if you were really trying or what? 2/5
Flow was wayy off mannnn. Try writing and freestyling before you actually record it!

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: RayZor - ATL Freestyle (Dedicated To All The Haters)

you killed it imo,

btw where'd u go?? i know u seen the replies in ya email lol.

[mykill]

Re: RayZor - ATL Freestyle (Dedicated To All The Haters)

Flow: C-
Lyrics: D

Overall: 1/5, Wow. This is bad. Lyrics are very elementary, pre-school even. I applaud the effort, but go back to the drawing board. Did you just do this to promote your website? I guess if you gotta promote, you gotta promote. Hopefully you'll do something a bit more polished and serious in the future.

[RaYZoR]

Re: RayZor - ATL Freestyle (Dedicated To All The Haters)

you killed it imo,

btw where'd u go?? i know u seen the replies in ya email lol.

I dont get emails from this ish.
but yeah this freestyle was a very longtime ago.
this isn't how I sound anymore.