input on a few one liners/verses? just need feedback :D

[devinkeller2]

its funny how we kill haters with the piece,
i make em say uncle, like my nephew or my niece,

and numbers dont lie, but liars say they hate me,
flirting with greatness, and success just wants to date me,

call my guns laxatives, make a ***** **** himself,
fight club flow, i could make a ***** hit himself

time is money, and you come up short like the hour hand,
danger close, i blow up like the taliban

i know you bet ill fail, and its nothing to me
you say your all in, and its just bluffing to me

i man the corner like deon
hall/haul *** like leon

i go so hard, and im killing em softly,
sleeping on me, ill wake you up like coffee

i see the future of the rap game,
you can call me oracle,
they ask if i will be the best,
well that question is rhetorical

im so calm,
but i could snap like a center,
im so hot,
i can bring heat waves to winter,
im so paid,
i get paper like a printer,

youre not in my bracket,
like you missed the playoffs,
365, 24/7 i never get a day off,
all of these verses i beat in,
will help me get my pay off,

car so sick i need drammamine,
verses leave you stammering

[OfficiallyE]

Re: input on a few one liners/verses? just need feedback

and numbers dont lie, but liars say they hate me,
flirting with greatness, and success just wants to date me,

youre not in my bracket,
like you missed the playoffs,
365, 24/7 i never get a day off,
all of these verses i beat in,
will help me get my pay off,

^ dope shit. wasnt feeling anything else.