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My name is Devin and a friend and I are going to collab. on a mixtape sometime in the future, and wrote a cover/remix for nightmares of the bottom. Feel free to give feedback, ratings, good or bad. the point is to improve and get some critical input. Thanks guys.
Sleeping at the bottom, and im dreaming of the top,
someday ill blow up, and i know ill never pop,
and when i see my chance, to the top ill make a beeline,
im so ahead of you rappers, finish your words you can call me T9,
god given flow, my mom shoulda named me divine,
im on my valentines, asking success to be mine
ask your girl, she says im sweeter than some key lime,
and someday youll be washed up, youre already on a decline,
you're not in my bracket, its like you missed the playoffs,
three-six-five, twenty four- seven, i never get a day off,
i dont take breaks, and i work it like an immigrant,
pumping up the crowd, my verses should be a stimulant,
i got my mind on my money, and my money on the nightstand,
im tripping in the clouds, and i threw away my flightplan,
rookie of the year, youll sink like vince young as a titan,
the bottom is dark, but somehow it ill brighten,
First 16 bars... 16 more in progress. Not caring for the last four bars. hope you enjoyed.
Sleeping at the bottom, and im dreaming of the top,
someday ill blow up, and i know ill never pop,
and when i see my chance, to the top ill make a beeline,
im so ahead of you rappers, finish your words you can call me T9,
god given flow, my mom shoulda named me divine,
im on my valentines, asking success to be mine
ask your girl, she says im sweeter than some key lime,
and someday youll be washed up, youre already on a decline,
you're not in my bracket, its like you missed the playoffs,
three-six-five, twenty four- seven, i never get a day off,
i dont take breaks, and i work it like an immigrant,
pumping up the crowd, my verses should be a stimulant,
i got my mind on my money, and my money on the nightstand,
im tripping in the clouds, and i threw away my flightplan,
rookie of the year, youll sink like vince young as a titan,
the bottom is dark, but somehow it ill brighten,
First 16 bars... 16 more in progress. Not caring for the last four bars. hope you enjoyed.