Pyromaniacs - Pyromaniac Penmanship

[Coleon]

Yo THC I'd like this to be stickied for a week as my prize for the Cypher III

L.o.F:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post657992
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...r-redding.html

[Sentus]

Re: ***Pyromaniac Penmanship***

*Worship*

fuck the 12 letter rule

[akkucc]

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nice flow man, but lyrics is not that good but overall it is very good and i also like the outro.

so for lyrics 3.5/5

flow 4.5/5

overall 4/5.

good luck!!

[Sentus]

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There it goes......right over his head

[MC_Crary]

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First of all I like the horror movie samples. I couldn't pick them all out but some of em.

Sentus: You had some crazy lines on this one man. Your usual lyricism is stepped up in this. I feel like that's a good thing about having a partner in rhyme. You push each other. The population control line would have to my favorite. You flow is more like your old flow on this but more focused I feel like.

Coleon: Good to hear something new from you. I thought you had bounced on us.The cypher champ doesn't disappoint on this one. Your flow's always been perfect but you rode the shit outta this beat. A fade out on the last word of your verse would have helped it not end so harshly.

Some of the bars on this track honestly blew me away. Nobody's fucking with The Pyromaniacs lyrically. Nice work guys. Hope this is the first single.

[Coleon]

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Thanks for peeping it Crary. Apparently Noble isn't going to sticky it because it's named wrong. Makes sense.

[cardenas4o9]

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First person: the lyrics were crazy as fuck but i didnt like the flow and the voice too much. if it sounded more natural and confident then it would be really really really dope to alot more people.
Second person: like the voice and flow more than the first person and had crazy lyrics too
I give it a 3.5/5 just because it sounds too amateur with the voice and flow

[mykill]

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Sentus // Flow: B- // Lyrics: A+
Coleon // Flow: B+ // Lyrics: A+

Overall: 4/5, There were some points in Sentus' verse where it sounded like he was forcing the flow. I'm a bit disappointed by that, because he's made so much progress towards getting rid of that battle rap flow. Lyrically no body in this entire forum (for the most part) can fuck with this song. Coleon's flow sounded on point. Work on the mastering a bit more with this one. Sentus' reverb sounded a tad too much and Coleon's vocal volume was kinda low. Other than that you got yourselves an A+ track right here. Kudos.

[Coleon]

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This is a track from the Summer so Sentus' flow has progressed since. No worries.

[Sentus]

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Thanks for all the feed guys

[ThaMothafuckinCarter]

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damn this shit is dope. your voice on the mic just sounds effortless. you put good emotion in to your music. reminds me of immortal tech a lil bit -all the conspiracy theory stuff. check out some of my shit under the name merc i need some feedback. thanks man

[BlakeJay]

Re: ***Pyromaniac Penmanship***

Sentus // Flow: B- // Lyrics: A+
Coleon // Flow: B+ // Lyrics: A+

Overall: 4/5, There were some points in Sentus' verse where it sounded like he was forcing the flow. I'm a bit disappointed by that, because he's made so much progress towards getting rid of that battle rap flow. Lyrically no body in this entire forum (for the most part) can fuck with this song. Coleon's flow sounded on point. Work on the mastering a bit more with this one. Sentus' reverb sounded a tad too much and Coleon's vocal volume was kinda low. Other than that you got yourselves an A+ track right here. Kudos.

Good song yall 4.6/5