MC_CRARY - Nightmares of the Bottom

[MC_Crary]

Nightmares of the Bottom

MC_Crary


Yo. It's been awhile since I've released my own track here, so I figured it was time to do something about that. This is a test recording. I just got my old laptop working again, I wanted to see how it'd sound to record something on it. There's been alot of background noise in my latest recordings due to recording in the living room on a desktop. This one's recorded in the bathroom. I wonder if there's too much echo in there lol? Anyway let me know what you think.


Also, September 20th (Promise no more pushbacks Artille lol), you get a new mixtape from me. Fuck Off Vol. 1.

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[akkucc]

Re: MC_CRARY - Nightmares of the Bottom

good man i heard you first time i like your flow it is cool and i also like the lyrics can you post that i wanna see, yeah but your voice is kinda different.

so from me for flow it is 4/5
lyrics 3.5/5
for voice 3/5

so overall 3.5/5

[MC_Crary]

Re: MC_CRARY - Nightmares of the Bottom

Maybe some feed on the vocal track? Too much air, air too flat? Keep in mind there is a slight reverb and delay. By the way thanks akkucc. I probably won't be posting the lyrics though.

[DreezyBaby]

Re: MC_CRARY - Nightmares of the Bottom

Flow started off rough imo, but when it hit the middle of the verse you started goin offfffff. Good shit man,didn't know you were 21? Thats whats up bro, drink to this shit lol. Anyway your flow was most def nice on this beat, and the lyrics went perfect. The reverb was good! 3.5/5

[MC_Crary]

Re: MC_CRARY - Nightmares of the Bottom

I felt that way about the flow too man. I really appreciate your feedback. I'd hoped you didn't feel like I was hating in my feedback on your Rollin verse I just know you can do better.

[DreezyBaby]

Re: MC_CRARY - Nightmares of the Bottom

I felt that way about the flow too man. I really appreciate your feedback. I'd hoped you didn't feel like I was hating in my feedback on your Rollin verse I just know you can do better.

Nah its all good man, I never trip even if it is hate! You should know that

[mykill]

Re: MC_CRARY - Nightmares of the Bottom

Flow: B+
Lyrics: B+

Overall: 3.5/5, Doesnt wayne have some other song he did to this beat? Something like "damn you the shit...." or something like that? Anyway, I thought the rhymes were good. Good shots to someone out there, real casual but still strong. Vocals seem good, but the reverb might be just a touch too much. Nothing that just "knocks my socks off" in the lyric department, but still good solid rhymes. You could use something between the verses to carry the song better than just dead air. Coolness.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: MC_CRARY - Nightmares of the Bottom

sound like a less polished biggie.
i see potential.
i love the beat, my type shit, sound smooth, and it do remind me of that wayne song mykill referring too, i think its called "with you". but its missing the vocal sample... , but this beat and the wayne song are in similar keys , so thats prolly what it is.
flow gradually improved throughout,
but i wasnt too pulled in by the lyrics, however they blended well wit the flow and beat

flow: 3.8/5
lyrics: 4/5

overall: , 3.9/5

other: i actually prefer the "crary offbeat flow" that u known for lol, but u changed it in this,

also i didnt know u was 21 either, i thought u was at least 25.

[MC_Crary]

Re: MC_CRARY - Nightmares of the Bottom

You must be a little hurt about a line or two in this song cause you're usually sucking my dick in every thread. Fuck outta here bitch.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: MC_CRARY - Nightmares of the Bottom

You must be a little hurt about a line or two in this song cause you're usually sucking my dick in every thread. Fuck outta here bitch.

wtf bro?? i didnt expect that response from u.

i never sucked anyone's dick in any thread brah, go check your threads and quote me where i did , otherwise, u got me confused wit somebod else man

i didnt hear any lines against me in this song lol , im definately not hurt about that.

this was just my thoughts after listening , seems you're the one thats mad smh.

like i already said, i have no beef wit u nigga,

kudos

[dooom777]

Re: MC_CRARY - Nightmares of the Bottom

4.4 out of 5

[JoelReal]

Re: MC_CRARY - Nightmares of the Bottom

i love the beat, my type shit, sound smooth, and it do remind me of that wayne song mykill referring too, i think its called "with you". but its missing the vocal sample... , but this beat and the wayne song are in similar keys , so thats prolly what it is.

Don't know if I'm reading this right, but it sounds like you don't even know this beat is on C4..