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  • Nightmares of the Bottom Remix (Tell me what you think)

    bars 1-16 are done, http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/wri...ide-input.html

    these are 16-32.
    written all by me, going to record it soon, it flows really well imo...

    I swear ill take it higher, i can almost see the top
    slept on like a mattress, until my mixtape drop
    i go so fucking hard, competition soft as talcum,
    ill be at the top, you stay in the middle like youre malcom
    pause before i eat rappers, its like im saying grace,
    thank you lord, for helping me lap them in this race,
    im keeping my pace, and i know ill never tire out,
    i rock it acapella, and you had to bring the choir out,
    theyre just tryin to get a sample, go ahead and taste this,
    she gets that hall of fame dick, like a jets waitress,
    that wasnt attemped murder, im pretty sure i killed it,
    my cups half full, and im just trying to fill it,
    i pour success until my cup is way past the compacity,
    they thought i was a quitter, did not expect my tenacity,
    realest shit you never got, dumber than the dumbest bitch,
    tie my pumas double knot cause im about to run this bitch,
    "Stop, analyzin' criticizin' you should realize what i am and start epitomizin'"
    "Your girlfriend is into them gangstas, and me being a gangsta, i get into your girlfriend"

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    Re: Nightmares of the Bottom Remix (Tell me what you think)

    nice lyrics bro, i like the bars man.

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    • #3
      Re: Nightmares of the Bottom Remix (Tell me what you think)

      thankss. going to record it asap hopefully
      "Stop, analyzin' criticizin' you should realize what i am and start epitomizin'"
      "Your girlfriend is into them gangstas, and me being a gangsta, i get into your girlfriend"

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      • #4
        Re: Nightmares of the Bottom Remix (Tell me what you think)

        Good :d :d :d :d

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        • #5
          Re: Nightmares of the Bottom Remix (Tell me what you think)

          Thankss man. Any weak verses to point out?
          "Stop, analyzin' criticizin' you should realize what i am and start epitomizin'"
          "Your girlfriend is into them gangstas, and me being a gangsta, i get into your girlfriend"

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