MYKILL - Trouble on my Mind

[mykill]

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[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: MYKILL - Trouble on my Mind

flow - 4/5

lyrics - 4/5

overall - 4/5

not a fan of this beat/chorus, but i liked the original wit pusha t and tyler only cuz their flows.
nice improvement, but a tad more energy would put this at par. nice, keep it up.

[MC_Crary]

Re: MYKILL - Trouble on my Mind

The Charlie Sheen line coulda used a better delivery. That would've been the bset line if it came out correctly. I've never heard the orginal song, but the beat is nice. That golden showers line was nice. For the most part your flow was on point. I was listening to MM1 earlier it is cool to see your progression, you sound more calculated now. Cunning and methodical. "Jets and Currensy, stay fly with my money trees" That was crazy man. Your lyrics on this were great. No complaints really bro, just that one line at the beginning. LMI/MMG Winning.

[mykill]

Re: MYKILL - Trouble on my Mind

Diezel is 100% right. At some point ill figure out this energy thing.

[cardenas4o9]

Re: MYKILL - Trouble on my Mind

Shit is dope but aside from the lack of enery, i feel like theres a lack of attitude/emotion. maybe its because your voice sounds the same throughout the verses. if you switch up your delivery every once in a while it might sound better still give it a 4/5 for the creativity, lyrics, and quality

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: MYKILL - Trouble on my Mind

Diezel is 100% right. At some point ill figure out this energy thing.

wtf??? i dont know if u bein sarcastic or not, but i'll take it u were bein serious

Shit is dope but aside from the lack of enery, i feel like theres a lack of attitude/emotion. maybe its because your voice sounds the same throughout the verses. if you switch up your delivery every once in a while it might sound better still give it a 4/5 for the creativity, lyrics, and quality

thats what i meant when i said energy.

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you sound more calculated now. Cunning and methodical. "Jets and Currensy, stay fly with my money trees" That was crazy man..

he rearranged one of my lines from "otis 2.0"

u could at least give me credit mykill

[Redd Herring]

Re: MYKILL - Trouble on my Mind

Sounds dope! some of it sounded a bit rushed out though but other than that you killed it.

[ItzTheRemixShawty!]

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SIR!....We Have To Collab I Like Your Lyrics And Most Of The Lines I Had To Listen To More Than Once(Which Is A Good Thing) You Flow So Well On Your Tracks Do You One Take Those?

Overall:3/5

[mykill]

Re: MYKILL - Trouble on my Mind

thanks for listening to this fellas!