Professor E - Mr. Still Smoking (Instrumental only)

[Tha Professor]

here's a beat i made.... i like it ... what about u?

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[Tha Professor]

Re: Professor E - Mr. Still Smoking (Instrumental only)

Bump.. y'all don't feel this or what? If anyone thinks they can jump on this with me you're more than welcome... that is, if u ain't too scared

[Redd Herring]

Re: Professor E - Mr. Still Smoking (Instrumental only)

Sounds pretty good to me. I like how it starts off but the girls humming or whatever kinda kills it for me. Still dope though and with the right preson on it it could turn out really good

[pgathriller]

Re: Professor E - Mr. Still Smoking (Instrumental only)

The transition into the humming was way too abrupt and doesn't really fit the beat

The verse sections of the beat itself feels like a long intro, it never really feels like it falls into the main beat

Bring in some more present drums instead just the mechanical sound type drums, needs a nice solid snare or something at the least to keep the groove going and make everything feel a bit more solid

Restructure it and give it a more solidified drumline and cut out the humming, use that for a separate beat or something, use something that fits the theme a bit more for the hook on this one

[Tha Professor]

Re: Professor E - Mr. Still Smoking (Instrumental only)

The transition into the humming was way too abrupt and doesn't really fit the beat

The verse sections of the beat itself feels like a long intro, it never really feels like it falls into the main beat

Bring in some more present drums instead just the mechanical sound type drums, needs a nice solid snare or something at the least to keep the groove going and make everything feel a bit more solid

Restructure it and give it a more solidified drumline and cut out the humming, use that for a separate beat or something, use something that fits the theme a bit more for the hook on this one

Thank you for checking it out. Y'all really didn't like the humming part? i guess i must have been crazy, cuz that was suppose to be the hook and it doesn't really fit with the verse bits.

and i tend to make my beats into a long intro i realized.. Ima give it another go to make it more complete.

[Young Corruption]

Re: Professor E - Mr. Still Smoking (Instrumental only)

yeah the humming came and a weird timing. not something i could rap on but it just needs some work and pga pretty much nailed it on the spot