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  • Misunderstood - JayDubb (I am VERY serious about my craft.)

    I have gotten very serious about my music.

    Check it out, Give me feedback, & support!

    @JayDubbOfficial
    facebook.com/jaydubbofficial


    Hulkshare.com Misunderstood.mp3




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    Re: Misunderstood - JayDubb (I am VERY serious about my craft.)

    SkJayDubb>>>Akkucc


    All I have in this world is a pistol and a promise!

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    • #3
      Re: Misunderstood - JayDubb (I am VERY serious about my craft.)

      This goes hard. Beat is sick and lyrics sounded great. Keep it up, and good luck.

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        Re: Misunderstood - JayDubb (I am VERY serious about my craft.)

        nice bro, really very good i love the chorus most keep it up.

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        • #5
          Re: Misunderstood - JayDubb (I am VERY serious about my craft.)

          Flow - This is one of the illest smooth flows I've heard on here in awhile. Damn.
          Lyrics - Digging the lyrics. Stayed on topic well while keeping your lyricism on point.
          Other - Hook could've been executed a tiny bit better, that was the only "bad" part of the song.
          Overall - 4.5/5. Keep it up bruh.



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          • #6
            Re: Misunderstood - JayDubb (I am VERY serious about my craft.)

            Flow: B+
            Lyrics: B

            Overall: 3.25/5, Reverb volume is too high. If you're trying to get that Lil' Wayne/MMG-esque reverb verse effect you need to turn the volume on it down a little bit. Gets annoying at times. Flow takes some bumps here and there. Chorus is hard to understand sometimes. Like how you used the chorus from the classic "Don't Let me Be Misunderstood" from The Animals. Everything seems to be in order for this track, but its hard for me to really "feel" it because of the technical annoyances. But then again, that's me.

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            • #7
              Re: Misunderstood - JayDubb (I am VERY serious about my craft.)

              This goes hard, i can tell that you giving some effort. MYK is right about the reverb. The chorus fits with all the reverb going on, but it is too much. Reverb is suppose to be like 'ear-candy', you can't have too much of it.
              I like how u switch the flow at the second flow. Lyrics are tight

              Overall: 3.4/5



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              • #8
                Re: Misunderstood - JayDubb (I am VERY serious about my craft.)

                Lol never realized how much you and J-Smooth sound alike. But in an Ace Hood/Meek Millz way. Kinda different subjects. The mastering couldve been alot better. Myk's right about the reverb. Including lowering the volume on, the percentage of reverb is a little too high too. It almost works on the hook, but maybe the beat is a tad too loud too. Too much echo can ruin the song. It distracts from your lyrics, that are great. Your flow could've been better on this one.

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                  Re: Misunderstood - JayDubb (I am VERY serious about my craft.)

                  Since you're so..."serious" lol. Your delivery is pretty much the only good part about this because of how much confidence you have in yourself. Your flow is on beat but there's nothing exciting about it. You had some decent rhymes but the overall quality of your lyrics were awful. If you really take rap serious I would suggest you start expanding your music taste beyond the garbage I'm assuming you listen to based on this.

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                    Re: Misunderstood - JayDubb (I am VERY serious about my craft.)

                    ^^^harsh but true. radio wise i could see this lifting off but i don't like radio play. the title is called misunderstood but the lyrics don't really back it up. why are you misunderstood? you should of explained in the lyrics kinda like a story telling type of song. the lyrics are good not gonna lie but i just don't get the song.
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                    • #11
                      Re: Misunderstood - JayDubb (I am VERY serious about my craft.)

                      Originally posted by Sentus View Post
                      Since you're so..."serious" lol. Your delivery is pretty much the only good part about this because of how much confidence you have in yourself. Your flow is on beat but there's nothing exciting about it. You had some decent rhymes but the overall quality of your lyrics were awful. If you really take rap serious I would suggest you start expanding your music taste beyond the garbage I'm assuming you listen to based on this.
                      I read this post the other day and it prevented me from listening to the song. Stumbled back across it today and decided to listen, and it was good. Maybe I'm biased because of the type of music I listen to versus the type of music others do, but tracks like these are attractive to my ears. Like everyone else said, the flow was on point, and the lyrics were above mainstream basic, and below underground deep/complex. A perfect medium. This is something I can see myself bumping on a regular basis. I fuck with this hard. Keep doing what you do bul.

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                      • #12
                        Re: Misunderstood - JayDubb (I am VERY serious about my craft.)

                        theres a hook, but sounds like a free style. Gota break up your shit to catch peoples ears. its a good start. alota ppl gave you negative feedback but keep going hard. also, you want you beat in the background more. It was hard to listen excatly what you were sayin.
                        to you haters...

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