MYKILL - No Church In the Wild

[mykill]

Yep. I hit that. Mykill freestyle incoming.



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[Cli-City]

Re: MYKILL - No Church In the Wild

Singing at the beginning was good until you got to the "make it out alive" part...that was terrible...

Lyrics: Below average..didnt say anything wort repeating..."Make that pussy smolder"......horrible dude...I know where you were trying to go but it didnt work..
Flow was a little rough around the edges...you didnt flow week at all..relax a little in the booth bro

2.5/5.....subject matter didnt flow either....but good attempt for a rookie.....keep it up..

[mykill]

Re: MYKILL - No Church In the Wild

Singing at the beginning was good until you got to the "make it out alive" part...that was terrible...

Lyrics: Below average..didnt say anything wort repeating..."Make that pussy smolder"......horrible dude...I know where you were trying to go but it didnt work..
Flow was a little rough around the edges...you didnt flow week at all..relax a little in the booth bro

2.5/5.....subject matter didnt flow either....but good attempt for a rookie.....keep it up..

thanks for checking it out. wasnt really focused at all with this one. just bored and got the beat and went with it.

[akkucc]

Re: MYKILL - No Church In the Wild

man your singing is quite good i like it but yes your flow on this one is not that good, little bit offbeat i notice that, your second verse is better then the first and for lyrics it is tough for me but as after watching other people's lyrics i will go with 3.5/5

and for flow i will go with 3/5.

good luck!!

[ItzTheRemixShawty!]

Re: MYKILL - No Church In the Wild

Hey I Liked It Was That You On The Hook Sir?The Lyrics Was On Point I Liked The Flow It Was Rather Jay-Z'ish
Overall:4/5

[Sentus]

Re: MYKILL - No Church In the Wild

Damn, that intro was sweet as fuck. Loved it. I think the end was a little redundent though, obviously a nonbeliever doesn't believe in anything. I'm not sure if this is a real freestyle or not. If it is then it's pretty good. If it's not then I didn't like it at all and the flow was really awkward. Also, the punch in and then end of the song wasn't put in very well. I know I'm not the best at them either I was just lettin ya know.

[mykill]

Re: MYKILL - No Church In the Wild

Damn, that intro was sweet as fuck. Loved it. I think the end was a little redundent though, obviously a nonbeliever doesn't believe in anything. I'm not sure if this is a real freestyle or not. If it is then it's pretty good. If it's not then I didn't like it at all and the flow was really awkward. Also, the punch in and then end of the song wasn't put in very well. I know I'm not the best at them either I was just lettin ya know.

this is just a freestyle to the Jay z/Kanye song. Chorus is the same that Frank Ocean sings, but i was the one singing it here. Yeah, its a was a real freestyle, just pause recorded. i havent ever got to point where i could do a whole 8 bars and such in one take. maybe one day. better at crafting pen and pad rhymes anyway. thanks for listening. I'll be on the lookout for new Pyromaniac stuff.

[Sentus]

Re: MYKILL - No Church In the Wild

this is just a freestyle to the Jay z/Kanye song. Chorus is the same that Frank Ocean sings, but i was the one singing it here. Yeah, its a was a real freestyle, just pause recorded. i havent ever got to point where i could do a whole 8 bars and such in one take. maybe one day. better at crafting pen and pad rhymes anyway. thanks for listening. I'll be on the lookout for new Pyromaniac stuff.

Oh well I've never listened to any of the Jay-Z/Kanye songs so that makes sense now lol. And don't be looking too hard.

[ProBitaz.]

Re: MYKILL - No Church In the Wild

Intro>>>>>>

But plz ya should re-do this with more focus on the flow/lyrics. Cause the beat is killer, and ya did the intro pretty good.

3/5

[ATLien666]

Re: MYKILL - No Church In the Wild

Damn, your singing was actually not bad, lol.

Flow - 2.5/5. It was the worst thing about this, it was all over the place, but it got way better towards the end of the second verse, so that was good.

Lyrics - 3/5 (If written) 3.9/5 (If freestyle).

Overall - 3.5/5

[MC_Crary]

Re: MYKILL - No Church In the Wild

The flow wasn't bad like everyone else said. It was just choppy cause the style of freestyle you were going for. I was actually feelin the flow. If you had've written to this beat you could've killed. It fits your voice well. The delivery was actually really good too, I know that's something you've been working on. I think when you write, you start thinking too much and lose the feeling. Lyrics weren't bad either. Like the whackamole line lol. Good offering man.

[mykill]

Re: MYKILL - No Church In the Wild

im already re-writing verses for this. can't waste that good singing lol. I'll post an updated version soon.