MYKILL - He's Ill (She Will Freestyle)

[mykill]

Um... been a while since I was on some Wayne...

Here.



*UPDATE* Other link got killed for some reason. So instead of re-upping it, I'll upload the remix. Check it out.

Download/Stream: Mykill - He's Ill (She Will Freestyle)
9/21-Download/Stream: Mykill & MC_Crary - We Ill (He's Ill Remix)

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http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post668885
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post668879

[MC_Crary]

Re: MYKILL - He's Ill (She Will Freestyle)

First song I've downloaded from here in awhile. Nice work bro. You captured the essence of the original but made it Myk. "I could've swore I was suppose to be on the original, rick ross. MC_Crary that nigga Fuck Diezel no slick talk". Lol, idk drunk thoughts. Perfect man, perfect.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: MYKILL - He's Ill (She Will Freestyle)

Flow - Typical Mykill flow.... Not many slip-ups this time around though.
Lyrics - Pretty cool. Heard a couple cool lines.
Other - Should've waited for the official instrumental, this remake was annoying kinda. The hook was kinda boring as well. You didn't have enough swag in your voice to recreate the hook style.
Overall - 3/5.

[mykill]

Re: MYKILL - He's Ill (She Will Freestyle)

Flow - Typical Mykill flow.... Not many slip-ups this time around though.
Lyrics - Pretty cool. Heard a couple cool lines.
Other - Should've waited for the official instrumental, this remake was annoying kinda. The hook was kinda boring as well. You didn't have enough swag in your voice to recreate the hook style.
Overall - 3/5.

yeah. pretty good summation of it right there. thx for listening

[Z!Greatest]

Re: MYKILL - He's Ill (She Will Freestyle)

Definetely one of my fave artists in The Studio, but I was only semi-feeling this.

Positives first, good flow for the majority, lyrically a similar vein to the original but obviously with your own spin. All present and correct here.

Lacking a lil bit of energy in the delivery in some parts, some parts seemed to have real emotion and other parts fell flat, no hate.

Finally, your rapping was very solid, as expected, but your singing was well....off key and flat lol. I'd genuinely have used a lil autotune, 20 retune-ish if you didn't want it roboty, but just to fix the key a lil.

Anyway, to summarise, I enjoyed the rapping, but the hook was pretty weak lol. 3/5 bro

[mykill]

Re: MYKILL - He's Ill (She Will Freestyle)

Definetely one of my fave artists in The Studio, but I was only semi-feeling this.

Positives first, good flow for the majority, lyrically a similar vein to the original but obviously with your own spin. All present and correct here.

Lacking a lil bit of energy in the delivery in some parts, some parts seemed to have real emotion and other parts fell flat, no hate.

Finally, your rapping was very solid, as expected, but your singing was well....off key and flat lol. I'd genuinely have used a lil autotune, 20 retune-ish if you didn't want it roboty, but just to fix the key a lil.

Anyway, to summarise, I enjoyed the rapping, but the hook was pretty weak lol. 3/5 bro

thanks for checkin' this out fam

[mykill]

Re: MYKILL - He's Ill (She Will Freestyle)

updated with new link to song and new song...sorta...

[akkucc]

Re: MYKILL - He's Ill (She Will Freestyle)

great work bro, really i like it most on all of your songs. great flow good lyrics(either i don't have enough knowledge bout it). flow is on the beat thats pretty good and yeah but instrumental is not official as THP said but its okay. i also like chorus but verses are really very good.

so for me flow 4.3/5
lyrics 4/5
overall 4.15/5

good luck bro,

[mykill]

Re: MYKILL - He's Ill (She Will Freestyle)

thanks for checking this out

[SkJayDubb]

Re: MYKILL - He's Ill (She Will Freestyle)

Flow - 3.5/5 - You got off beat a few too many times.
Lyrics - 4/5 - They were ok, Things could have been thought out better though.
Overall - 3.75/5

[Cli-City]

Re: MYKILL - He's Ill (She Will Freestyle)

Pretty good..You always spit some good shit.....But I would like to hear you venture out....Experiment with your voice and flows...but this is good...
Watch out for flow...you slipped a couple times....peep that before your listeners do..

[mykill]

Re: MYKILL - He's Ill (She Will Freestyle)

thanks for listening fellas