Akkucc ft. Yung Diezel and Yung Cash - It's Good remix

[ATLien666]

He said you can delete the original thread.

Hulkshare.com It's Good.mp3

Lyrics -

Yung Diezel:

imma king on his throne,but i shine without that thang on my arm
rachet with the racket, i ping wit the pong
they trynna fight tonight, i said i see ya in da morn
then im bringing the storm,no irene, more bossing
im goin str8, green,
take a break wit dat gay shit, no red shit, no nigga, no pausing
summer sun; this is raw heat
when i ride the fuckin beat, they like where's the fuckin car keys??
i got the nerve to hit a nerve,
its a nope whatever floats your boat, this will make ya heart sink
if u gotta do it, go ahead and do it dawg
im in the laboratory, why u in the lavatory??? all u do is stall
this is my point of view; birds eye view wit a nerd's iq
invest in the nest, i know u heard i flew
im the shit but i dont give a shit, bitch, that means u couldnt get any of the turds i pooped.
no kidding when im spitting, attention to detail , to every word i spew
attempting is tempting, but got redemption from every curse i threw,
wont stop till im rich, flyest whips ; bird like coupes
(fuck it for now, im just im aimin, for the stars and i just might shoot) x2

Yung Cash:

Been to hell and back, the trip was overrated/
My friends done changed, oh yeah, I must've made it/
Still No Apologies, even though I hate to say it/
'Cause I don't give a fuck; they should have a matching fragrance/
Okay, I'm back in, so back up/
I lost my mind and didn't have time to make backups/
So yeah, forget it/
I know better, so I did it/
With no regrets/
I cut the bullshit to cut the checks/
Shoutout to the niggas to changed me/
I set the bullshit aside and deleted what phased me/
And actually gave them a good reason to hate me/
So bitch, hate that/
I'm tryna make history 'cause you can't change facts/
I'm 16 years old, so why you mad, though?/
It's kinda ironic that I'm shittin' on you assholes/
And I hate 'em talkin' crazy, we're kinda like Salem/
Now I just leave 'em hangin' and watch they body dangle/
So it is what it is, and you do what you can/
and it's all good, nigga, long as you understand.../

Akkucc:

yeah this is ashu yeah,i told you before that,
so please member this,this name, cause it surely gonna get the fame,
this is surely one of the dopest game, in past that i never seen,
but please get ready cause now i came, come and fight and prove you the lame,
give me bad and get the same, give me good we friends became,
never backstab cause i am the man, i am not white so i don't need a tan,
love rap game and weezy fan, i don't drink but love champagne,
yes i am good cause people sayin, gonna fall these haters prayin,
people love that i have to gain, but bad path you don't get the plain,here we go,
so leave or go on this bad path but sorry you can't make complain,
if you leave or stop sorry you will gonna fail,
so you have to be fast yes fast like the internet mail,
yes i love to go on date but sorry i will never pay,
yes i love to go on beach but sorry i don't like the clay,
no one is your friend here, this game alone you have to play,
you win you get the people's clap, you loose you get the hater's slap,
don't have pussy go for rape, then spend seven years in the jail,
you are dog so please add a tail, in this case you don't get the bail,
huge amount you have to pay, yes my birthday come in may,
and i like leg piece in my tray, but i like my girl in the gray,
we always go for getting laid, yes for each other we are made,
and for each other we are mad, whenever we fought yes we get sad,
and i have a style that you can't trap, yes russia get the biggest map,
but in cities there are so much gap, and i am not stunna who always says blapp,

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[akkucc]

Re: Akkucc ft. Yung Diezel and Yung Cash - It's Good remix

hey listen this version with ATLien666 aka Yung Cash
by the way nice verse cash.

[DeezyMac]

Re: Akkucc ft. Yung Diezel and Yung Cash - It's Good remix

All trolling aside, 3rd verse >>> 2nd verse simply because it was actually on beat and flowed nicely.

But the lavatory line >>> the whole song.

[wayniac number1]

Re: Akkucc ft. Yung Diezel and Yung Cash - It's Good remix

akkuc , u really need a new mic or something


and great flow, diezel

[devinkeller2]

Re: Akkucc ft. Yung Diezel and Yung Cash - It's Good remix

Alright...

Diezel- sick flow, but dont let wack lines get in the way of letting your sick ones shine.

this part was just kinda ehhhhh-

"then im bringing the storm,no irene, more bossing
im goin str8, green,
take a break wit dat gay shit, no red shit, no nigga, no pausing
summer sun; this is raw heat
when i ride the fuckin beat"

but this shit right here....-
"i got the nerve to hit a nerve,
its a nope whatever floats your boat, this will make ya heart sink
if u gotta do it, go ahead and do it dawg
im in the laboratory, why u in the lavatory??? all u do is stall
this is my point of view; birds eye view wit a nerd's iq"

not going to lie this was sick, i coulda sworn you stole it from wayne lol.
forreal just try not to rush your writing. im not a professional or anything, but i wanna try and help you.
write it, do what you need to do, and then give it a week. come back after the week,
and if you think its wack, trash it. wayne even does it (even if it was because of the prison sentence (i.e. dear anne))
but aside from a few wack lines it was really good.



yung cash- your verse was pretty good too, stayed witht the beat pretty well, and had a few pretty ill lines.
im sure it was intentional, but i wasnt a big fan of re-using part of drakes verse from the song. id rather hear a line that kinda has some shout out/homage to the original, without using 5 of the same words in the verse.

but drakes verse in "its good" wouldve been better if he said

"been to hell and back, the trip was overrated,
they telling lies about me, oh yeah i mustve made it"

instead of that "im fucking faded" verse. so props to you on that. other than that i liked your verse, but like diezels, there was a few weak lines that im sure you could fix up pretty easily. pretty good job man.

akucc- dude your flow was great as always, but the obvious thing that needs to improve is your english. your english improves=your lyrics and rapping improves with it. i know its hard to do (i got a d in spanish senior year), but its whats standing in your way from making yourself known (which it seems to be what youre going for). also stay away from some more vulgar/sexual/cussing lines until you do improve your english. to be honest (im not trying to make fun of you) but when you rap stuff like "don't have pussy go for rape, then spend seven years in the jail" and "and i wanna make out yes wanna make out with the two girl,yeah" i think it comes off kinda funny, and im sure other people do too. id say hold off on that kinda stuff until you get better with english

But really you had the best flow on the song. keep it up.


And to wrap it up a few suggestions for you guys...

Find new monikers/stage names.... theres too many young/yung/ and lil's in the rap game. find a name to set yourself apart and distinguish yourselves. and diezel id say change the sig. you have swagger in all your songs but the cliche mirror pick contradicts swagger same with the "owow" thing. do what you want its just a friendly suggestion.

and ATLlien666/ yung cash... this maybe a reach but i put the fact that you said youre 16 together with the "salem verse" and im guessing you read crucible recently or something. just wondering lol

ANYWAYS goodjob guys. keep it up and sorry if i come off as a dick i just wanna help.

[akkucc]

Re: Akkucc ft. Yung Diezel and Yung Cash - It's Good remix

Alright...

Diezel- sick flow, but dont let wack lines get in the way of letting your sick ones shine.

this part was just kinda ehhhhh-

"then im bringing the storm,no irene, more bossing
im goin str8, green,
take a break wit dat gay shit, no red shit, no nigga, no pausing
summer sun; this is raw heat
when i ride the fuckin beat"

but this shit right here....-
"i got the nerve to hit a nerve,
its a nope whatever floats your boat, this will make ya heart sink
if u gotta do it, go ahead and do it dawg
im in the laboratory, why u in the lavatory??? all u do is stall
this is my point of view; birds eye view wit a nerd's iq"

not going to lie this was sick, i coulda sworn you stole it from wayne lol.
forreal just try not to rush your writing. im not a professional or anything, but i wanna try and help you.
write it, do what you need to do, and then give it a week. come back after the week,
and if you think its wack, trash it. wayne even does it (even if it was because of the prison sentence (i.e. dear anne))
but aside from a few wack lines it was really good.



yung cash- your verse was pretty good too, stayed witht the beat pretty well, and had a few pretty ill lines.
im sure it was intentional, but i wasnt a big fan of re-using part of drakes verse from the song. id rather hear a line that kinda has some shout out/homage to the original, without using 5 of the same words in the verse.

but drakes verse in "its good" wouldve been better if he said

"been to hell and back, the trip was overrated,
they telling lies about me, oh yeah i mustve made it"

instead of that "im fucking faded" verse. so props to you on that. other than that i liked your verse, but like diezels, there was a few weak lines that im sure you could fix up pretty easily. pretty good job man.

akucc- dude your flow was great as always, but the obvious thing that needs to improve is your english. your english improves=your lyrics and rapping improves with it. i know its hard to do (i got a d in spanish senior year), but its whats standing in your way from making yourself known (which it seems to be what youre going for). also stay away from some more vulgar/sexual/cussing lines until you do improve your english. to be honest (im not trying to make fun of you) but when you rap stuff like "don't have pussy go for rape, then spend seven years in the jail" and "and i wanna make out yes wanna make out with the two girl,yeah" i think it comes off kinda funny, and im sure other people do too. id say hold off on that kinda stuff until you get better with english

But really you had the best flow on the song. keep it up.


And to wrap it up a few suggestions for you guys...

Find new monikers/stage names.... theres too many young/yung/ and lil's in the rap game. find a name to set yourself apart and distinguish yourselves. and diezel id say change the sig. you have swagger in all your songs but the cliche mirror pick contradicts swagger same with the "owow" thing. do what you want its just a friendly suggestion.

and ATLlien666/ yung cash... this maybe a reach but i put the fact that you said youre 16 together with the "salem verse" and im guessing you read crucible recently or something. just wondering lol

ANYWAYS goodjob guys. keep it up and sorry if i come off as a dick i just wanna help.

yeah bro, i leave that words a lot,listen some of my first songs full of that.

[Tha Professor]

Re: Akkucc ft. Yung Diezel and Yung Cash - It's Good remix

lol
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[ATLien666]

Re: Akkucc ft. Yung Diezel and Yung Cash - It's Good remix

lol
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This nigga, though, lol.

[DreezyBaby]

Re: Akkucc ft. Yung Diezel and Yung Cash - It's Good remix

All you niggas killed it! Shitttt, made me wanna do a verse to it lol. Easily everyone was on they A Game on here. 4/5
Keep it up, niggas aint ready for that Forever anyway the flow was pretty much on point on every verse, but maybe thats just me. Idk. Good shit!

[akkucc]

Re: Akkucc ft. Yung Diezel and Yung Cash - It's Good remix

All you niggas killed it! Shitttt, made me wanna do a verse to it lol. Easily everyone was on they A Game on here. 4/5
Keep it up, niggas aint ready for that Forever anyway the flow was pretty much on point on every verse, but maybe thats just me. Idk. Good shit!

yeah bro, you killed that forever verse.

[Darkdevilr]

Re: Akkucc ft. Yung Diezel and Yung Cash - It's Good remix

first and second guy killed it , holy shit !

[RaYZoR]

Re: Akkucc ft. Yung Diezel and Yung Cash - It's Good remix

Diezel, good verse like always
I feel Yung Cash's verse is not syncing with the beat.

Akkucc...I don't drink but love Champagne?? besides a few lines like that there is much improvement in your lyrics and make much more sense then a few other remixes you've posted.