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I'm 14 and this is my first rap because i just got some inspiration. Gimme some feedback and help me improve please . i might record it if i really like it or get good responses. take note i was pretty high when i wrote this.
ay girl i saw you first thing in the class
you had your hair tied back and sweat pants
preparin for some dance number
but i aint never had your number
lookin fine as hell like some cool cucumbers
I said “wasup girl, you know our siblings liked each other”
but little did i know that we might last forever
You said you liked my voice but my pants needed a hook
you said you were starstruck by just the way I look
I said baby i aint got nothin you
your angel eyes, long hair but i might satisfy you
those lips , those cheeks damn id die for you
let the beat drop like how my heart did when you told me you liked me
But you said you had no plans for a relation...ship , no not titanic
you said you had shit to do everyday
you couldnt ever find time for me anyway
I aint gon lie that shit made me low
girl i even told you we gotta take it slow
“but we could still be the same” you said baby
but you dont know how it is to be me baby
when you love a girl who really dont want to be with you
that shit is really complicated , my dawgs are like
“damn i feel you”
but i said i’d wait baby, id be here baby
id be here with my arms wide open like sweet Jesus baby
ay girl i saw you first thing in the class
you had your hair tied back and sweat pants
preparin for some dance number
but i aint never had your number
lookin fine as hell like some cool cucumbers
I said “wasup girl, you know our siblings liked each other”
but little did i know that we might last forever
You said you liked my voice but my pants needed a hook
you said you were starstruck by just the way I look
I said baby i aint got nothin you
your angel eyes, long hair but i might satisfy you
those lips , those cheeks damn id die for you
let the beat drop like how my heart did when you told me you liked me
But you said you had no plans for a relation...ship , no not titanic
you said you had shit to do everyday
you couldnt ever find time for me anyway
I aint gon lie that shit made me low
girl i even told you we gotta take it slow
“but we could still be the same” you said baby
but you dont know how it is to be me baby
when you love a girl who really dont want to be with you
that shit is really complicated , my dawgs are like
“damn i feel you”
but i said i’d wait baby, id be here baby
id be here with my arms wide open like sweet Jesus baby
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