Sentus-The Roast (Feat. Mc Anonymous & Tom Chambers)

[Sentus]

http://www.facebook.com/SentusMusic7

http://www.supashare.net/qo3b4qa81k8d

v1: Mc Anonymous
http://www.youtube.com/xMCxAnonymousx
v2: Sentus
v3: Tom Chambers
http://www.youtube.com/tomchambers5388

Produced by TGB Productions
http://www.facebook.com/pages/Scrubz-TGB-Productions/183214115023718



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[Young Corruption]

Re: Sentus-The Roast (Feat. Mc Anonymous & Tom Chambers)

MC:2nd best verse i think. loved his voice and the lyrics but some parts went to fast for me to hear what he said the first time which isn't a bad thing cause i didn't mind replaying the song

Sentus: Best verse, since last time i heard you, you've gotten better, lyrically you're always one of the best on this site and you didn't fail to show it yet again. good job

Tom: worst verse but by all means its not a bad verse. just the weakest out of the three but still up there as being a very good rapper with nice lyrics

Other: all of you fit the song prefect with your voices. they compliment each other very nicely

[Sentus]

Re: Sentus-The Roast (Feat. Mc Anonymous & Tom Chambers)

Thanks bro


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[SkJayDubb]

Re: Sentus-The Roast (Feat. Mc Anonymous & Tom Chambers)

hm, so this is what you call "better" then me?

You're a try hard, your flow is forced, & nothing you spit sounds natural, & it is obvious at more then a few points where you used multiple tracks for your one verse.

And you sound VERY typical, you don't have a voice for rapping. Now before you go boasting to people, make sure you recognize your OWN mistakes.

[ATLien666]

Re: Sentus-The Roast (Feat. Mc Anonymous & Tom Chambers)

*Sets up chair here instead. Pops popcorn and grabs ICEE*

[Sentus]

Re: Sentus-The Roast (Feat. Mc Anonymous & Tom Chambers)

hm, so this is what you call "better" then me?

You're a try hard, your flow is forced, & nothing you spit sounds natural, & it is obvious at more then a few points where you used multiple tracks for your one verse.

And you sound VERY typical, you don't have a voice for rapping. Now before you go boasting to people, make sure you recognize your OWN mistakes.

Hmmm, well for one this was recorded about 2 monthes ago, so I've obviously gotten much better since then and two, all you can complain about is the voice LMFAO. The flow and delivery is perfect and the lyrics are 100x better than anything you've ever imagined spitting. Hop off my dick bro, you're looking like a fool.

[SkJayDubb]

Re: Sentus-The Roast (Feat. Mc Anonymous & Tom Chambers)

Ha, that's what I was speaking of when I said you're a try hard, your lyrics are forced, and nothing you spit sounds natural. You try to sound smart, but you sound like your average white rapper. Take some notes from Kendrick Lamar or Prince EA, you might do better.

But look, I gave you my criticism, you gave me yours, I have my own style, you have none at all,
but i'm not about to give your thread as much exposure as you gave mine.

Thanks for that by the way, it was appreciated.

[Sentus]

Re: Sentus-The Roast (Feat. Mc Anonymous & Tom Chambers)

Ha, that's what I was speaking of when I said you're a try hard, your lyrics are forced, and nothing you spit sounds natural. You try to sound smart, but you sound like your average white rapper. Take some notes from Kendrick Lamar or Prince EA, you might do better.

But look, I gave you my criticism, you gave me yours, I have my own style, you have none at all,
but i'm not about to give your thread as much exposure as you gave mine.

Thanks for that by the way, it was appreciated.

Wtf are you talking about LOLOLOLOLOLOL I hate when people use try hard as an insult. Yes, I try hard becuase I love it. And I would LOVE for you to try and explain how this is trying to "sound smart" whatsoever.

And you have your own style? Oh my this just keeps getting better and better. Not only do you have the exact same style as Lil Wayne, Drake and every other mainstream rapper, which already sucked in the first place and was a joke, but you are horrible at it. You're a clown, an embarassment to people who take Hip-Hop serious, you're on the same level as Soulja Boy and rappers like him. Please, do everyone a favor and stop rapping.

[SkJayDubb]

Re: Sentus-The Roast (Feat. Mc Anonymous & Tom Chambers)

Tryhard in the manner that everybody can tell you are forcing what you say to come out of your mouth.

Blah Blah Lil Wayne, Soulja Boy whatever, tf do you rap about? and you need your own VOICE to succeed as a rapper. You sound VERY typical as I've stated.

What will a label listen to first? Something that the general public will put on their iPod? or someone who is an uptight asshole and brags about being a wanna be "hip hop elitist."

Oh, ok, you stay underground, I go mainstream, FINE by me.

---------- Post added at 07:53 PM ---------- Previous post was at 07:48 PM ----------

btw why are you on a FANSITE forum, for a rapper that you think is garbage?

Are you that desperate for people to hear your music?

[Sentus]

Re: Sentus-The Roast (Feat. Mc Anonymous & Tom Chambers)

Tryhard in the manner that everybody can tell you are forcing what you say to come out of your mouth.

Blah Blah Lil Wayne, Soulja Boy whatever, tf do you rap about? and you need your own VOICE to succeed as a rapper. You sound VERY typical as I've stated.

What will a label listen to first? Something that the general public will put on their iPod? or someone who is an uptight asshole and brags about being a wanna be "hip hop elitist."

Oh, ok, you stay underground, I go mainstream, FINE by me.

---------- Post added at 07:53 PM ---------- Previous post was at 07:48 PM ----------

btw why are you on a FANSITE forum, for a rapper that you think is garbage?

Are you that desperate for people to hear your music?

Thank you for not replying to anything I said, concession accepted on multiple bases.

I'm forcing what I say to come out of my mouth? I'm sorry but that doesn't make any sense whatsoever. How do you rap without forcing the sound out of your mouth? Do you just open your mouth and the sound escapes on it's own? Please explain like somone with at least any intelligence whatsoever.

I need my own voice? My voice is my own, at least I'm pretty sure it is. You never know though, I could be a ventriloquist dummy. P.S The irony of this statement is you sound exactly like thousands of rappers all over the internet.

Who will a label want first? That's irrelevant. A label wants who's going to sell the most, not who's the better rapper. The general public doesn't listen to rap for the rapping, they just want something with a catchy beat that they can dance and bop there head to. But hey, if you want to ride a producer's dick for a year for a split second of fame be my guest. I'll get played for years and years by countless fans because I'm actually a good rapper. P.S Considering the fact that there are thousands of people who are exactly like you the chances you blow are about 10,000 to 1. I wouldn't bet on those odds.

Am I desperate for people to hear my music? What kind of question is that? I want as much exposure as possible, simple as that. If you were "serious about your craft" you would understand that. Thank you for proving again how much of a joke you are.

[SkJayDubb]

Re: Sentus-The Roast (Feat. Mc Anonymous & Tom Chambers)

You want to be sarcastic huh?

Well to sum it all up, you're the type of rapper, that if put in a playlist with a variety of other songs, would get skipped over before you begin your verse.

And no, that is not the case with labels. Yes, Flocka AND Lil Wayne have both had hit songs.

But who has had the most? Who has the AWARDS? who has the recognition? Not Flocka, or you I might add.

Your songs aren't interesting, as stated, you sound like your typical white boy who just wants to be a rapper and brag about the fact that he is a rapper.
but you have no passion for it, Lyrics aren't the only thing you need to be a good rapper.

You need flow, delivery, lyrics, and a key element that attracts the audience to your music, which you do not have.

I could NEVER really see anything i've heard from you performed on stage in front of a sold out venue, and take that from someone who comes from a musical family.

NO sarcasm, complete honesty, now you can be as witty as you want to about this, I could give a fuck less, I know what I'm doing.
I'm going to get exposure because I can bring in an audience, and a fan base, and there isn't anything that you can say to that statement right?

Because rappers want as much exposure as possible correct?

[Franknstein]

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