A Verse from one of my raps; check it.

[OfficiallyE]

Not to get personal but this shits comparison,
who's living at the top and who's still buried in.
I’m going so hard, it looks like ill always win.
Live it for the excitement and adrenaline.
My lyrics get people jacked up, while yours lay there thin.
Bitch, im coming right at you, Kill you and your next of kin.

[KidComet]

Re: A Verse from one of my raps; check it.

My God, this is great.

[OfficiallyE]

Re: A Verse from one of my raps; check it.

No feedback people?

[Z!Greatest]

Re: A Verse from one of my raps; check it.

Solid but generic.

[BloodKin]

Yes, add heavy A A B B A. Limerick. Use defined words that create a picture. If you can sit down and write a picture vividly..

[FuckTheFeds]

Nice try but 3/10

[Zimmie]

My God, this is great.

[KidComet]

bruh 5 years passed like 3 seconds

[Zimmie]

bruh 5 years passed like 3 seconds

Time goes by very fast man