Pyro ft.Instinct - Airplanes

[xXPyroXx]

After allot of technical problems and restructuring im Back....and better than ever

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[mykill]

Re: Pyro ft.Instinct - Airplanes

didnt u post this before?

[xXPyroXx]

Re: Pyro ft.Instinct - Airplanes

didnt u post this before?

Ah....no ? thats kinda random does it seem familar or something

[mykill]

Re: Pyro ft.Instinct - Airplanes

maybe. i think its just that SOOOOOOOOO many people have done their own version of this song. Coulda sworn I heard one with Instinct on the hook before...ah well

[xXPyroXx]

Re: Pyro ft.Instinct - Airplanes

Thanks man im sure those comments wont affect my views at all :/

[mykill]

Re: Pyro ft.Instinct - Airplanes

that was never my intention. a ton of ppl have done that song. its a fact. ppl will still listen to it despite what i say

[xXPyroXx]

Re: Pyro ft.Instinct - Airplanes

Bump for feed back guys

[Sentus]

Re: Pyro ft.Instinct - Airplanes

Haha I did a version to this aswell, I think you should have kept the Haley chorus though, I didn't really like this one. You have really good quality, better than I remember before. Your delivery is pretty good, I'd give it a B just because I think it could still get better but it doesn't take away from the song at all. I didn't like your lyrics much though, the way you structured your rhymes it didn't even sound like you were rhyming half the time. Flow was solid though, I don't think it fell off at all. Nice job.

[xXPyroXx]

Re: Pyro ft.Instinct - Airplanes

Haha I did a version to this aswell, I think you should have kept the Haley chorus though, I didn't really like this one. You have really good quality, better than I remember before. Your delivery is pretty good, I'd give it a B just because I think it could still get better but it doesn't take away from the song at all. I didn't like your lyrics much though, the way you structured your rhymes it didn't even sound like you were rhyming half the time. Flow was solid though, I don't think it fell off at all. Nice job.

Thanks man Constructive criticism is always welcome

[mykill]

Re: Pyro ft.Instinct - Airplanes

Pyro // Flow: B // Lryics: B
Instinct // Overall: A

Overall: 3.75/5, I'm REALLY sick of this song, but I'll try not to let that affect my feedback. Mastering is pretty good on this except Instinct's vocals arent as clear and crisp as they should be. Lyrics on verse 1 are solid and good quality. Pyro, you've really come up since the first time you posted on here. Like always I'm happy to see people's progress in their "Tha Studio" careers. Verse 2 has some good bars on it, and great delivery on the flow change. Solid track from the both of you.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Pyro ft.Instinct - Airplanes

Flow - Was good. Your emotion and confidence on the mic is great.
Lyrics - Went with the song good, a couple lines I liked throughout.
Other - Hook, ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Work on your mastering and it would've been more enjoyable as a whole though.
Overall - 4/5.

[xXPyroXx]

Re: Pyro ft.Instinct - Airplanes

Pyro // Flow: B // Lryics: B
Instinct // Overall: A

Overall: 3.75/5, I'm REALLY sick of this song, but I'll try not to let that affect my feedback. Mastering is pretty good on this except Instinct's vocals arent as clear and crisp as they should be. Lyrics on verse 1 are solid and good quality. Pyro, you've really come up since the first time you posted on here. Like always I'm happy to see people's progress in their "Tha Studio" careers. Verse 2 has some good bars on it, and great delivery on the flow change. Solid track from the both of you.

thanks i know how hard it is to listen to a beat your sick off and im so glad you liked it enough effort went in, im glad it paid off

Flow - Was good. Your emotion and confidence on the mic is great.
Lyrics - Went with the song good, a couple lines I liked throughout.
Other - Hook, ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Work on your mastering and it would've been more enjoyable as a whole though.
Overall - 4/5.

thanks i really worked on my mic presence