Sentus- Beautiful Sorrow

[Sentus]

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[akkucc]

Re: Sentus- Beautiful Sorrow

good one again bro, i like it.

[MC_Crary]

Re: Sentus- Beautiful Sorrow

Different side of you. I like it. I feel like the hook could have been better with maybe a background singer or something. I think that would've made it stick out more. That would be my only complaint. Grade A stuff man.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Sentus- Beautiful Sorrow

didnt sound like a happy song to me.

this is like a part 1 to that other song u did the hook for, which imo was your best song.

its fuccked up that u not good enough for that chick, hopefully u find another.

overall - solid song. flow and lyrics fit the song beat and topic was clear throughout.

let your next song be about how u found a new bitch though, and u finally good enough for.

u sprung on this one u aint good enough for . she must've had some good pussy.

[Cli-City]

Re: Sentus- Beautiful Sorrow

Hook was meh.....verses were better.......for a song this soft you could've relaxed your voice a little..delivery sounded too aggressive...but overall a great song....If the hook had a chick it would've sounded crazy...

[KidComet]

Re: Sentus- Beautiful Sorrow

This is better than lil wayne?

[Cli-City]

Re: Sentus- Beautiful Sorrow

This is better than lil wayne?

Who said this is better than Lil Wayne???

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Sentus- Beautiful Sorrow

lmao if this is better than wayne.

[akkucc]

Re: Sentus- Beautiful Sorrow

This is better than lil wayne?

what are you talking bro???

[xXPyroXx]

Re: Sentus- Beautiful Sorrow

Firstly i like the concept the rhyme scheme was a little all over the place like your chosing words that could rhyme with the right emphesis but your not putting it on them, you have to minipulate the syllables, your verses were good though, delivery of the starts of your lines need work but then you finnish well

[mykill]

Re: Sentus- Beautiful Sorrow

Flow: A-
Lyrics: A+

Overall: 5/5, Wows. There were some flow drops, but still good though. Hook was REALLY good lyrically. Mastering sounds pretty on point too. This could be the best song you've made....

[Sentus]

Re: Sentus- Beautiful Sorrow

Well if you guys know any background singers/ chorus singers don't be afraid to send them over...

And yes, this is out of Lil Wayne's world and infinitely better than anything he's ever even attempted.