YUNG DIEZEL - Let The Beat HeaL

[YUNG DIEZEL]

YEAH........... producer sent me this beat and it reminded me of wayne's "let the beat build" song which is one of my favorites, so i did this joint.

i wrote the first verse, and half of the second verse, but started freestyling off the dome halfway in the second verse lol.
enjoy!!

Hulkshare.com YUNG DIEZEL - LET THE BEAT HEAL (SERIOUS ABOUT MY CRAFT PART 1).mp3

lyrics:

what a predicament
livin in this life innocent to
neva get a cent of it
ruled by the percentages;
i get it all, in preliminary addictions, withdraw
all in all, im really just rich and
shit;
thats my deliverance, but yall niggas aint gettin it
im still livin it,
im serious, yall niggas still frivolous
to the fact, i mastered the track and on top of it,
my flow is so flawless, nigga aint no stoppin it
geeked up, greeked up, high, im on the acropolis
eagle fly on ya ride , on these niggas i will drop the shit
fed up of the feds, runnin from the cops and shit
but still, understand i will pop a bitch, soda
yeah i used the supa dupa flow , nigga everybody doin it....... so what??
on these roosters, cuckoo,
and to these squirrels, i go nuts dude, crazy
prostitute, opposite, fuck u pay me

chorus:

ooh i think they like my style
i like to see the people , when the crowd go wild
im shinin when the lights go out
and everybody go crazy

bridge:

everybody knows
everybody shows
i heard the shotty blow(gunshot),
where the party go??

second verse:

okay imma let the beat build,
hold on, i killed it, let the beat heal,
but there's no healing from death,
imma good catch throw it, he'll intercept
randy moss, it can be got;
like how i stole her goodies from the candy shop; ciara
and i had 50 cents, hold on where the hell 50 went??............ (after that was off the dome)...............




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[akkucc]

Re: YUNG DIEZEL - Let The Beat HeaL (IM VERY SERIOUS ABOUT MY CRAFT PART 1)

nice bro, i like it nice chorus nice verses nice beat. everything is good.

[DreezyBaby]

Re: YUNG DIEZEL - Let The Beat HeaL (IM VERY SERIOUS ABOUT MY CRAFT PART 1)

This shit is dope. Yo I swear you remind me of this one rapper man, I can't think of his name for some reason but the tone you rap in is like his, but you do it better. No homo. Had some nice lines and nice wordplay and the freestyled part was funny as shit !

Flow: 4
Lyrics: 3.5
Overall: 4

Fuck with me in the future bra.

[Cli-City]

Re: YUNG DIEZEL - Let The Beat HeaL (IM VERY SERIOUS ABOUT MY CRAFT PART 1)

Yung Diezel is a dope MC......PERIOD

[MC_Crary]

Re: YUNG DIEZEL - Let The Beat HeaL

Flashes of a misguided immature artist. When you get off the internet bullshit and just focus on your music you'll be great. That is all.

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: YUNG DIEZEL - Let The Beat HeaL

nice bro, i like it nice chorus nice verses nice beat. everything is good.

thanks bro.

This shit is dope. Yo I swear you remind me of this one rapper man, I can't think of his name for some reason but the tone you rap in is like his, but you do it better. No homo. Had some nice lines and nice wordplay and the freestyled part was funny as shit !

Flow: 4
Lyrics: 3.5
Overall: 4

Fuck with me in the future bra.

bet bro, and thanks for listenin.
also.............

Yo I swear you remind me of this one rapper man, I can't think of his name for some reason but the tone you rap in is like his, but you do it better.

if u remember his name lemme know, or if he in the studio and u dont wanna mention his name here, pm me who it is lol, i wanna hear him.

Yung Diezel is a dope MC......PERIOD

appreciate it bro, thanks for listenin.

Flashes of a misguided immature artist. When you get off the internet bullshit and just focus on your music you'll be great. That is all.

thanks for listenin bro, but how am i misguided and immature though???

[MC_Crary]

Re: YUNG DIEZEL - Let The Beat HeaL

Your need for internet beef and controversy.

[wayniac number1]

Re: YUNG DIEZEL - Let The Beat HeaL

wow, good song, like your flow + i love the beat


actually diezel is the best rapper on LWHQ imo

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: YUNG DIEZEL - Let The Beat HeaL

Your need for internet beef and controversy.

oh , lol.

u right, i been procrastinatin on my craft.
i get distracted too easily.
but i guess i should get back on my grind.
good looks bruh.

wow, good song, like your flow + i love the beat


actually diezel is the best rapper on LWHQ imo

thank you bro , appreciate the listen and recognition.

[A$AP YAMS]

Re: YUNG DIEZEL - Let The Beat HeaL

You're the only studio rapper where I consider downloading your song

You have a great rap voice lol

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: YUNG DIEZEL - Let The Beat HeaL

You're the only studio rapper where I consider downloading your song

You have a great rap voice lol

thank you bro, i appreciate that.
i know voice is so important in this rap shit. so i practice and experiment wit my voice and shit alot.
Some guys here have decent lyrics, but the voice or delivery needs improvement.
imo voice and delivery are the most important first.
thats how lil wayne manages to sometimes get some of the most basic lyrics sound hot lol.

[MC_Crary]

Re: YUNG DIEZEL - Let The Beat HeaL

Very good point there. there are multiple ways to make yourself stand out and you're a master of that. So stop rippin Wayne's swag and come with something original. I know you've got it in you.