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i liked the flow you chose just because its out of the box for the beat meaning when the beat drooped i totally though you were gonna go one way and then what you did do actually worked better. mastering was very good quality too. no shoes no shoes ahaha
song is so simple , but i think one of your best songs. i love the no shoes hook kinda made me laugh
was it your intent for this to be kinda funny?
it seems you are getting more comfortable on the mic because u sound more confident in this than i remember from your other songs i heard.
only thing i noticed is that your "esses" (s's) are really sibilant in your songs. as if u have a lisp or something, or maybe too close to the mic.
i dont know how u could fix that though.
Flow: You rode the beat pretty good the entire time throughout the song, but it was very monotonic the entire time. Like you was on some lazy flow type shit lmao. 3.5/5
Lyrics: There weren't any lines that really stood out to me, but in particular I liked the first verse the most of the three. Second verse was a bit weak and you ended the third verse nice in my opinion. 3.5/5
Hook: I'm sorry, I can't get vibe with the hook man. It doesn't sound right to me. 2/5
Overall, it was good though. I listened to it a few times now and I must say, that hook is lazy but starting to grow on me lmao...no shoes XD
BUT THIS PIMP IS, AT THE TOP OF MOUNT OLYMPUS
READY FOR THE WORLD'S GAMES, THIS IS MY OLYMPICS
I fucks with the verses man. It almost seems like your EXTREMELY laid back about it tho, I'm big on emotion in verses tho so thats something I always listen for first. As far as the hook I see what your saying about the milli, a milli, a milli shit, but on the real, thats them. Let that "a millie" shit have its lane, and develop your own without those gimmicks. Overall, I like what your doin, stay on your grind!
not gonna be a pushover, im pushin thru to your ears
kickin' a villanous lyric, ignitin' up all your fears..
I fuks wit dis to a extend! U was killin it on the 16 but the hook kinda lost me but im still fuckin wit u!.u cant go wrong wit Skate & Bravo on the beat! #goodshit #keepgoin
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