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Flow - Your flow was solid until the 'butts' line, then it started falling off more. Try to keep your lines all about the same length and syllables. It will help things flow together better.
Lyrics - Your lyrics still aren't making any sense. You should try to learn English better after you put out your mixtape. It will only help you in the end...
Other - Keep it up man.
Overall - 2/5.
Thats kinda part of his appeal tbh. If he starts pronouncing everything perfect he'll just end up soundin like any other rapper here
Flow - Your flow was solid until the 'butts' line, then it started falling off more. Try to keep your lines all about the same length and syllables. It will help things flow together better.
Lyrics - Your lyrics still aren't making any sense. You should try to learn English better after you put out your mixtape. It will only help you in the end...
Other - Keep it up man.
Overall - 2/5.
i am also indian but i have to say akkucc is far behind other rappers because English is not our mother tongue and he is doing that also with daily improvement
i will give 4/5.
I'm sorry. I didn't like this. It seemed like you were stressing your pronounciation speed to match the beat. Verse 1 didn't flow that well, Verse 2 had some improvement.
Also when you sing the Chorus and provide the background vocals, it sounds kinda weird. Its a bit annoying to hear a background vocal when there is already one in the original song.
I liked your other songs better that this one.
I'm sorry. I didn't like this. It seemed like you were stressing your pronounciation speed to match the beat. Verse 1 didn't flow that well, Verse 2 had some improvement.
Also when you sing the Chorus and provide the background vocals, it sounds kinda weird. Its a bit annoying to hear a background vocal when there is already one in the original song.
I liked your other songs better that this one.
Overall: 2.8/5
i will try to improve that bro, thanks for listening.
I admire your hustle considering the language barrier mate, I really do. It just makes it hard, as someone who has English as my first language, to take some of your work seriously when the grammar is so broken. However, the improvement is there in leaps in bounds, in regards to both flow and grammar.
The lyrics to me are pretty basic, but I can tell you if I tried to rap in any other language I would probaly have to spit elementary level bars lol, so I applaud the fact your actually getting in punchlines etc.
I've mentioned before your "background vocals" either need light Autotune or a few more takes to get in key, putting it bluntly. I could see you doing rap in India easily, singing though...the jury's still out.
Based purely on musicality this would be a 2/5, but for sheer commitment, hustle and hard work I'm gonna bump it up to a 3. Keep it up bro
I admire your hustle considering the language barrier mate, I really do. It just makes it hard, as someone who has English as my first language, to take some of your work seriously when the grammar is so broken. However, the improvement is there in leaps in bounds, in regards to both flow and grammar.
The lyrics to me are pretty basic, but I can tell you if I tried to rap in any other language I would probaly have to spit elementary level bars lol, so I applaud the fact your actually getting in punchlines etc.
I've mentioned before your "background vocals" either need light Autotune or a few more takes to get in key, putting it bluntly. I could see you doing rap in India easily, singing though...the jury's still out.
Based purely on musicality this would be a 2/5, but for sheer commitment, hustle and hard work I'm gonna bump it up to a 3. Keep it up bro
hey thanks bro, yeah i have to learn that mastering or something. and i have to get a good mic for the good vocal quality then everything is gonna be fine. now i am not making any songs until i get good mic and i will learn mastering or something except for the features that other people will ask.
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