Cli-City - Doing My Job (Snippet)

[Cli-City]

Still on Garage Band..My Apologies from the jump....but I heard the beat and figured I would always get time to re-record the rest and finish it...but I wanted to put out the direction I was heading on it.... fuck with a nigga
listen with the lyrics it will make it a little more bearable..

LimeLinx - Preview - Cli-City - Doing My Job (Prod. Kanye West)(Snippet).mp3

Lyrics

Now would you rather be a stripper or a secretary?
Sometimes you just gotta do whatever necessary
She’s got a lotta kids, she’s got a lotta bills
Baby father aint there but shit she gotta live
She does what she can, and what she can’t she doesn’t
Always thinking bout her kids even when she fucking
And God knows if a better job comes along
She would take in a minute…
Shorty got a call on night it was her mother
She said baby stop what you doing God please
She started to cry and then she whispered that she loved her
She said mom you just gotta understand me…I’m just doing my job
I’m just doing my job

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[ATLien666]

Re: Cli-City - Doing My Job (Snippet)

Shit, for a snippet this was really nice. Can't wait to hear the whole thing.

Lyrics - 4.5. Would've been a 5, but it's just really short, lol. Hint of J. Cole in there; nice storytelling abilities, which is a relief to hear around here.

Flow - 4.5. Same complaint, also the quality kinda takes away. But it's not bad at all.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Cli-City - Doing My Job (Snippet)

That's my nigga.... TOUGH shit.


You need to finish this full man. It's short so I won't go into detailed feedback. But the lyrics are on point, I dig what you are spitting. And the flow never was bad and it was enjoyable. J. Cole shit here.....


But aye, PM me if you possibly want me to try to start mastering your songs. I wouldn't mind giving it a shot...

[ProBitaz.]

Re: Cli-City - Doing My Job (Snippet)

You spit as real as your are in person on this forum. This is on some whole other level bro!

Get a good mic, let THP (or learn yaself) to master good, then you'll be the top 3 rappers ever in here. No doubt.

[Syko]

Re: Cli-City - Doing My Job (Snippet)

shit bangs

[kryspy]

Re: Cli-City - Doing My Job (Snippet)

I wish you lived around me so you could jump in my studio. Keep doing yo thang bro!

[Cli-City]

Re: Cli-City - Doing My Job (Snippet)

How much yall spend on your mics???

Preciate that shit my niggas.....