Kid Comet- I hate highschool Remix

[KidComet]

Kid Comet- I hate Highschool by Deion James on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

Keep in mind its just a song i made for school, I plan on making a vid for it later, so the lyrics are the simplest shit ever.

I just wanna know if it sounds iight, dnt judge it lyrically wise


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[ThaMothafuckinCarter]

Re: Kid Comet- I hate highschool Remix

honestly i really really like this song. the lyrics are simple but it doesnt take it away from the song at all sometimes you need more simple lyrics to effectively tell your story and it works perfectly in this song. mastering is great, hook is great. love it imma defs watch out for your songs in the future. 4.5/5

[mykill]

Re: Kid Comet- I hate highschool Remix

Flow: B+
Lyrics: B

Overall: 4.75/5, Mastering seems pretty good. You do it all yourself? Lyrics are bad for what they are. You gotta tailor the lyrics to the audience and the platform and the concept, and those lyrics fit perfectly for all three. I'm not gonna lie, I'm a Kid Comet fan. To me, this is another great track showing your potential for being a good entertainer. When you make the vid, add it to this thread. Not any apparent slip ups anywhere. Chorus/Hook was perfect. No real technical issues with this song either. Keep it up man.

[MC_Crary]

Re: Kid Comet- I hate highschool Remix

I agree with Myk man you did your thing on this one. And as simple as the lyrics maybe the paint a picture that I'm sure all of us older guys can remember. I'm a fan myself, just not feelin the based one lol.

[KidComet]

Re: Kid Comet- I hate highschool Remix

Flow: B+
Lyrics: B

Overall: 4.75/5, Mastering seems pretty good. You do it all yourself? Lyrics are bad for what they are. You gotta tailor the lyrics to the audience and the platform and the concept, and those lyrics fit perfectly for all three. I'm not gonna lie, I'm a Kid Comet fan. To me, this is another great track showing your potential for being a good entertainer. When you make the vid, add it to this thread. Not any apparent slip ups anywhere. Chorus/Hook was perfect. No real technical issues with this song either. Keep it up man.

Yeah I did the mastering, just layered and harmonized on some parts.
Thanks

[epeezy]

Re: Kid Comet- I hate highschool Remix

Really nice song man, quality sounds pretty good too. And yeah lyrics aren't too complex but theyre good for describing the highschool life which im sure is all you really wanted to do. The song totally reminds me of my high school life lol. good job!

[TupacShaquer]

Re: Kid Comet- I hate highschool Remix

Yo I really felt this. And lyrics weren't to bad. Can't wait for video