MARCO - Uptown Remix (Verse 1)

[RaYZoR]

Alright so this remix is a by a friend of mine's, Marco who wrote his first verse to Drake/Bun B's "Uptown"

Hulkshare.com MARCO-Uptown verse1.mp3

Listen and give some feedback.
I thought it was good, there is a part where he kinda misses a beat where it makes that bar sound awkward but its straight for the most part.

I don't have lyrics written for this one....Also this was recorded via Mp3 Player mic, so the quality ain't the best


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[ThaMothafuckinCarter]

Re: MARCO - Uptown Remix (Verse 1)

Well first of all sick beat choice one of my favorite beats. lyrics were on point but it was a lil hard to hear them ik its hard when u dont have a mic and all that shit. good flow and you put good emotion in your voice. ik thats something i have to work on with my music. 3/5

[mykill]

Re: MARCO - Uptown Remix (Verse 1)

Flow: B-
Lyrics: C

Overall: 2.75/5, The guy doing the "toot toots" to the beat in the beginning is pretty fly. True story, lol. Flow seems pretty good. I can see where you get that "there's a bar that's awkward" statement. Lyrics are kinda elementary. If you guys had some solid equipment to record on, I could give you better feedback but its hard with all the static and poor quality. Keep posting. Peace!

[RaYZoR]

Re: MARCO - Uptown Remix (Verse 1)

Flow: B-
Lyrics: C

The guy doing the "toot toots" to the beat in the beginning is pretty fly. True story, lol.

Haha. That was me, I was feeling the beat, lol.