So Gone - $unnyy & Ziggy B (feat. Anna)

[Z!Greatest]

What's going on LWHQ, got another track here with my frequent collab partner and good mate $unnyy, basically about feeling distant with a chick you were close with because of other people getting involved. Subject is personal to me and him so it was easy to team up on this.

Sunny takes verses 1 and 2, myself and the 3rd and intro/outro and of course the angelic Anna on the hook.

Here's the track, with my feedback directly below, cheers;

Feed 1- http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-sorrow-2.html

Feed 2- http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...v-remix-2.html

[MC_Crary]

Re: So Gone - $unnyy & Ziggy B (feat. Anna)

Felt like SUnny's flow could've been better. He needs better mic presence. He shouldve treated the mic like it was the girl he was talking too, you know. I love the sing songy flow on yours, you've improved from the last time I listened to you. Great mastering, couldve been stronger on Sunny's verse but that's about it. Good track guys.

[pgathriller]

Re: So Gone - $unnyy & Ziggy B (feat. Anna)

Hook is bomb and the beat is dope

$unny's flow is pretty rugged; needs to be smoothed out - - and the adlib doubles sound too loud and muddy up the verse instead of accentuate it

perhaps try to EQ out some of the bottom end in his vocals to give it a less muddy tone. some of the adlibs sound like they're distorting too

Your vocals are mixed a lot better - - sounds like two completely different mixes; use some of the effects you used on your verse on his vocals to give it a better sound. Your flow is also much more fluid than $unny's

Clean up that mix so this can jam!

[broc717]

Re: So Gone - $unnyy & Ziggy B (feat. Anna)

I fucks with the hook heavily. I am diggin the mastering as well, nice verses too, the one dude should've went harder with his delivery tho. Good music.

[Z!Greatest]

Re: So Gone - $unnyy & Ziggy B (feat. Anna)

Felt like SUnny's flow could've been better. He needs better mic presence. He shouldve treated the mic like it was the girl he was talking too, you know. I love the sing songy flow on yours, you've improved from the last time I listened to you. Great mastering, couldve been stronger on Sunny's verse but that's about it. Good track guys.

I'll pass on your feed to him, appreciate the comments on my verse bro

Hook is bomb and the beat is dope

$unny's flow is pretty rugged; needs to be smoothed out - - and the adlib doubles sound too loud and muddy up the verse instead of accentuate it

perhaps try to EQ out some of the bottom end in his vocals to give it a less muddy tone. some of the adlibs sound like they're distorting too

Your vocals are mixed a lot better - - sounds like two completely different mixes; use some of the effects you used on your verse on his vocals to give it a better sound. Your flow is also much more fluid than $unny's

Clean up that mix so this can jam!

Cheers bro, funnily enough mixed on the same laptop but done individually, I'll see if I can tell what's causing the difference in sound between the two mixes.

I fucks with the hook heavily. I am diggin the mastering as well, nice verses too, the one dude should've went harder with his delivery tho. Good music.

Hook is dope, no credit taken for that sadly haha. Cheers though, it's my mate on 1 and 2, and me on 3, which one of us d'you think should've went harder?

[Z!Greatest]

Re: So Gone - $unnyy & Ziggy B (feat. Anna)

Bump so more people can see this

[mykill]

Re: So Gone - $unnyy & Ziggy B (feat. Anna)

$unny // Overall: C-
Z! // Flow: A // Lyrics: A
Anna // Overall: A+

Overall: 3.75/5, o.O Anna is amazing! I know she's using some autotune but DAAAAAMN. $unny's questionable on this track. Seems amateur after hearing Anna belt out some serious notes. Lyrically he's alright, but his delivery and flow are kind of outta sync to the track. Mastering is iffy too, the reverb/delay effect used is kinda of awkward. Z! you go in on this. Flow sounds pretty on point. Mastering on your verse is nice. Great verse to close the track out. $unny is really the only thing that brings this track down. Get that dude some more practice.