Elevators Remix ft. Cli-City (added on verse)

[Cli-City]

I didn't feel like downloading the instrumental and recording and all of that shit...so I noticed McCrary and Noble's track had a slot at the end.....so I did the honors...no disrespect to those guys record...not trying to steal your shit....Still on my garage band shit....you already know what it is..fuck with a nigga

LimeLinx - Preview - Elevators.mp3

Lyrics

Elevated off this kush, bitch I’m faded
April 20th my born day happy belated
If real recognize real we can’t be related
They say love is pain and it can’t sedated
I don’t smoke with all these lame niggas
Death Of Autotune shit bitch I got them Pain Killers
Grew up in a town where hope doesn’t visit
Faith we don’t know him, and love we don’t miss it
Instead of reading books, we read out pops going to prison
For robbing a liquor store trying put food in the kitchen
Should I show you the hand that I was given?
Dealt cards when some of the best cards were missing
What do you do…that life though
The closest shit to you beating you up, that micheal
Shout out noble and mccrary nigga
Elevated on an elevator scary nigga

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[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Re: Elevators Remix ft. Cli-City (added on verse)

I didn't feel like downloading the instrumental and recording and all of that shit.

u still had to download the song noble and crary were on, and record. whats harder about downloading the instrumental, and recording ?

[mykill]

Re: Elevators Remix ft. Cli-City (added on verse)

Flow: B+
Lyrics: A

Overall: 4/5, First of all, GET YOUR ASS A GOOD MIC. Stop wasting good verses on bummy mics please. You're killin' me! There's not much I can say to improve on this, except the obvious technical problem. Maybe put a little more "umph" in this, but other than that lyrics are on point. Finished out the track pretty well if you ask me. You should drop more freestyles when you get the time. So far, I like what I'm hearing. Just not a fan of the quality

[Cli-City]

Re: Elevators Remix ft. Cli-City (added on verse)

Flow: B+
Lyrics: A

Overall: 4/5, First of all, GET YOUR ASS A GOOD MIC. Stop wasting good verses on bummy mics please. You're killin' me! There's not much I can say to improve on this, except the obvious technical problem. Maybe put a little more "umph" in this, but other than that lyrics are on point. Finished out the track pretty well if you ask me. You should drop more freestyles when you get the time. So far, I like what I'm hearing. Just not a fan of the quality

Thanks bro...I know...im working on that mic shit...but when I heard Noble and Crary on this shit..I had to add my own shit....
what do you mean by umph?????

[RiCH HOMiE QUiL]

Re: Elevators Remix ft. Cli-City (added on verse)

WOW you killed this shit. keep it up bro

[mykill]

Re: Elevators Remix ft. Cli-City (added on verse)

More feeling/emotion. Same prob for a lot of us. Happens when u read lyrics sometimes

[BlakeJay]

Re: Elevators Remix ft. Cli-City (added on verse)

More feeling/emotion. Same prob for a lot of us. Happens when u read lyrics sometimes

yeah that happens to me to. sometimes when i spit it, it sounds like im putiin emotion into it but when i listen back it doesnt sound like it.

OT: Good stuff Cli-City i like da pain killers line

[Cli-City]

Re: Elevators Remix ft. Cli-City (added on verse)

More feeling/emotion. Same prob for a lot of us. Happens when u read lyrics sometimes

Thanks bro...I will work on that...

[Tunechi Lionches]

Re: Elevators Remix ft. Cli-City (added on verse)

Yeah some more emotion would help but it's lyrically an A . Your flow was nice too

[Cli-City]

Re: Elevators Remix ft. Cli-City (added on verse)

Yeah some more emotion would help but it's lyrically an A . Your flow was nice too

Respect my man....

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Elevators Remix ft. Cli-City (added on verse)

Killed it my dawg....

[MC_Crary]

Re: Elevators Remix ft. Cli-City (added on verse)

Great work, I wish you woulda been on the original. The mic is a necessary fix but hopefully that'll be coming soon. Your lyrics have a vibe that were not really hearing around here right now. Love it man. Can't wait for you to get that mic man.