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  • Checkmate - Stick Up (Feat. Vicious) (Prod. By BTP)

    Stick Up is a UNIQUE DOPE TRACK! Dope Lryics & Dope Beats Produced by BTP The Mastermind behind Dorrough's "Ice Cream Paint Job" delivers a bangin production!

    "Stick Up"
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    Re: Checkmate - Stick Up (Feat. Vicious) (Prod. By BTP)

    Flow: A
    Lyrics: C+

    Overall: 3/5, Beat is unique. I like that. Mastering is very very good. Who does your mastering? Lyrics are kinda tame. Was expecting some really good, hard hitting punches with the intro and the beat, but a lot of the rhymes are elementary. Work on your wordplay and multis maybe? Not a bad radio-esque track though if that's what you're aiming for. I can see somebody's girl is shakin' her butt to this in the club....
    Last edited by mykill; 10-11-2011, 07:28 PM.

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    • #3
      Re: Checkmate - Stick Up (Feat. Vicious) (Prod. By BTP)

      My b I dont mean no disrespect to the forum or site

      Heres my feedbacks
      Feedback #1: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post691943

      Feedback #2: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post691947

      #respect

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      • #4
        Re: Checkmate - Stick Up (Feat. Vicious) (Prod. By BTP)

        updated with feedback!

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        • #5
          Re: Checkmate - Stick Up (Feat. Vicious) (Prod. By BTP)

          ha, typical generic rapper. but your quality is very nice and all technicalities seem on point. nice street single or club joint i suppose.
          im guessing you use studio equipment, probably pro tools?

          YELLOW DUCK MUTHAFUCKA!!!!!!!!!!!

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          • #6
            Re: Checkmate - Stick Up (Feat. Vicious) (Prod. By BTP)

            @mykill i appreciate the feedback homie I got mo tracks on the way wit deeper content and more lryical content idk wat ya'll in it for but im in it to win so I make the records dat ppl wanna hear b4 the records they need to hear just stay tuned @lilchukie thanks fo the feedback i appreciate it good.or bad but i aint ya average rapper homie its just one record I got a fanbase to keep satisfied feel me? dey been ridin wit me so I gotta make the records dey wanna hear but i got sum shit just fuk.wit me

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            • #7
              Re: Checkmate - Stick Up (Feat. Vicious) (Prod. By BTP)

              Very good mastering and quality. Gotta real good voice too. The verses could be a little longer and some better lyrics but sounds good. The hook is too repetitive for me. I'd give it a 4/5. Keep workin man. I'll be lookin out for new shit.

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              • #8
                Re: Checkmate - Stick Up (Feat. Vicious) (Prod. By BTP)

                This shit rides yo. The beat, damn; the flow was cool for what it was; & the lyrics were cool for the song. I fucks with this.



                protect dunston at all costs

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                • #9
                  Re: Checkmate - Stick Up (Feat. Vicious) (Prod. By BTP)

                  Nice track man. I can see this doing well in the streets. Seems like you got a little push behind you already. That's always good to see, I'm a fan of anyone succeeding at their craft. I didn't really have any feedback for you, just wanted to say good luck.

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                  • #10
                    Re: Checkmate - Stick Up (Feat. Vicious) (Prod. By BTP)

                    If I heard this song come on the radio, I'd turn up the bass, blast the volume, and just roll around yelling "Hands Up, This A Muhfuckin' Stickup" at the pedestrians.

                    Dope song my son . Like mykill said, A+ flow with C- lyrics. (Tyga would be proud). Beat is bananas. The "smell like first place" line came off awkward to me, like you forced it or something. Other than that, song's really good. People throw around 'generic rapper' in a pejorative way, but as "typical" as it is, it's well done. Props.

                    3.5/5

                    What's A Goon To A Willem Dafoe.

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                    • #11
                      Re: Checkmate - Stick Up (Feat. Vicious) (Prod. By BTP)

                      @deezymac preciate the feedback homie

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                      • #12
                        Re: Checkmate - Stick Up (Feat. Vicious) (Prod. By BTP)

                        The quality of the master is great. The lyrics are cool. Not too complex but the flow is on point. Keep grindin hommie and keep droppin those tracks dude.

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