Headlines Freestyle

[rookies]

Short track I did one night when I had some free time. Love that song by Drake. Can't wait for that 'take care'.

http://soundcloud.com/preston-welker...ines-freestyle

Somebody should start a Cypher thread. After watchin them BET Awards, I really wanna get in on one.



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[ThaMothafuckinCarter]

Re: Headlines Freestyle

Wow this is actually really good. have u been rapping for awhile or are you just starting cuz u sound like u have some experience.no homo but what i enjoyed most was just how clear your voice was on the track it made it sound good. it was hard for me to get all the lyrics just cuz u havnt posted em but u did a good job makin em sound good. kinda like how juelz santana can make anything sound good with that flow. 4/5

[rookies]

Re: Headlines Freestyle

Wow this is actually really good. have u been rapping for awhile or are you just starting cuz u sound like u have some experience.no homo but what i enjoyed most was just how clear your voice was on the track it made it sound good. it was hard for me to get all the lyrics just cuz u havnt posted em but u did a good job makin em sound good. kinda like how juelz santana can make anything sound good with that flow. 4/5

Appreciate it bro. I been goin for like 2 years while im in school. Me and my boy just started playin shows (Rookies's Profile @ HotNewHipHop.com) last spring. Still beginners but tryin to do work. Thanks for the feedback. Heres the lyrics-->


confusing confidence for cockiness
you saying i cant cover drake
take the lyrics keep the beat
its shown y'all that i aint fake
i could do it any night
don't give that losing time of day
send it in and mix it up
i'll send it out the other way
hesitate
i had a taste, but
listen to these girls that yelling
telling stories, gossip girls, always. lively. blake. shelton.
bitches melting just to feel my cool, call me mr freeze
took the baddest bitch around and had her fallen to her knees
saying preston pretty please, but u don't know the half of it
wam bam, thank u mam, but we just call that fast loving
fast loving, you could be fast too
if you'd just get right here and let me get inside you
oh yeah id like to
cause u da shit
come let me wipe you
i could clean that benefit
i seen that pretty pic
i be on the internet
i know u into it
so let me go in depth with it
and when u get it, u goon send it right back
take a minute just to think about the level im at
independent, just to be around the level im at
push and pull at every clock just tryna turn the time back
but u cant, and u wont, i aint leaving, u can go
come and rock, at my show, we the rookies, and u know
we goon blow this boat, motha fucka im the captain
if u don't get the picture now
you better get the caption

[DilemmaHipHop]

Re: Headlines Freestyle

Cool flows.. I personally rock w somethin harder when its lyrical tho and this aint. Still givin you props on the flow, it was pretty solid mostly, and the delivery was on point for the most part also. 3/5

[mykill]

Re: Headlines Freestyle

I did some verses to this....

dont like em though...

Flow: B-
Lyrics: B-

Overall: 4.25/5, Vocals sound pretty low. Need more animation in your voice when you spit. It's not a delivery thing or a flow thing, its getting more enthusiastic about spitting like you did the latter half of the verse. I know you trying to do that "drake monotone flow" but its hard to capture correctly for people that have more animated voices. Still fly though. Nice work dude.

[rookies]

Re: Headlines Freestyle

Thanks for the feedback! Yeah I was tryin to do the "drake voice" in this one. And the lyrics could def be better. I didn't spend much time on it at all. But i'll work on the emotion thing. I've been concentrating on my delivery lately. Delivery is a huge part to being a solid rapper. But thanks for the feedback! I'll keep workin.

[mykill]

Re: Headlines Freestyle

Delivery is a huge part to being a solid rapper.

REAL. RAP. TALK.

keep up the good work man!