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  • Mr. FTP x Noble - Totem Pole (Prod. By Joey Cutless)



    New track from me and my boy Noble.
    We both go in for about 2 and a half minutes straight!
    Let us know what you think of this. We be on that #NextLevelShit

    Lyrics
    http://shortText.com/yOiiPZ

    Feedback:
    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...n-youtube.html
    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post692882
    Last edited by JMSN; 10-12-2011, 05:09 PM.

  • #2
    Re: Mr. FTP x Noble - Totem Pole (Prod. By Joey Cutless)

    Bitch I'm going out brain, where the fuck my mind gone?
    Thinkin' you ahead of me, man yo' fuckin' time wrong
    Bitches with me, getting high, trainwreck out my bong
    You ain't right; I ain't wrong... I'm lookin' like a wrong right
    And you wrong, right? I'm too gone, sittin' here on this long flight
    Going in, all night; just to make sure my songs right
    Get your facts straight, bitch I'm authentic
    In the club, throwin' bottles, I'm a fuckin' bartender
    It's Noble, imma tough act to follow
    Rollin' fatty's, you won't see that blunt passed tomorrow
    We still blazin', we stayin' up; I hate the ground, I'm cravin' blunts
    An OZ gone, you won't have that much cached by the morning
    Uhh, and I told you so
    You better slow your role, because I know my goal
    And thats to get to the top of totem pole
    But I need a little push, thats what I'm smokin' potent for
    THP up in the bitch, we the thing up in this bitch
    The top so cloudy, I can't see up in the bitch
    And if we down by two, I'd drain a three up in this bitch
    And my crew so talented, Glee up in this bitch
    Yeah we are the shit, killin' songs like its my occupation
    Shoutout to the doubters, y'all better stop the hatin'
    That's real shit, man it's set in stone
    Smoke a few blunts, I'm in a better mode
    I'm in a better mood, fuck the lies they telling you
    It's cuffing season, sweater crew
    All you motherfucka's need to keep it real
    I never peek my skill, 'cause I don't sleep for real
    Steady climbin' to get where I'm supposed to be
    I hope you see, but when you get there you won't be close to me
    So just, hopefully, you know its me
    And if you diss me you won't even get a quote from me
    I'm a spit a lil' sicker for these ignorant children
    If ya willing, give me a second and I'll kill it
    Never gunna lay off, don't care what they say dawg
    Nevermind the state law, introduce you to my fire like Adolf
    So volcanic, I'm outstanding
    Take you back to day I was born; now you mothafuckers just panic
    And vanish....


    Fucks with this everyone. Noble X Mr. FTP. Swag us out!



    protect dunston at all costs

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    • #3
      Re: Mr. FTP x Noble - Totem Pole (Prod. By Joey Cutless)

      Song is fucking FIRE!....Nothing else needs to be said...this one is resting in peace....

      S/O to NOBLE for ripping a new hole in this shit and Mr. FTP that flow is stupid....good job niggas.....

      this one on the itunes....you know what that means..


      FLAMES FLAMES FLAMES...WOW....it goes this shit goes as a motherfucker damn...
      Mississippi x California x North Carolina



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      • #4
        Re: Mr. FTP x Noble - Totem Pole (Prod. By Joey Cutless)

        Originally posted by Cli-City View Post
        Song is fucking FIRE!....Nothing else needs to be said...this one is resting in peace....

        S/O to NOBLE for ripping a new hole in this shit and Mr. FTP that flow is stupid....good job niggas.....

        this one on the itunes....you know what that means..


        FLAMES FLAMES FLAMES...WOW....it goes this shit goes as a motherfucker damn...
        Thanks bruh!



        protect dunston at all costs

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        • #5
          Re: Mr. FTP x Noble - Totem Pole (Prod. By Joey Cutless)

          pretty good hype type song "Im so fucking real, even my lies have truths" hardest line in the song.

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          • #6
            Re: Mr. FTP x Noble - Totem Pole (Prod. By Joey Cutless)

            Appreciate the feedback Pestrator & Cli. I'm hoping to do a few more tracks with Brendon soon!

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            • #7
              Re: Mr. FTP x Noble - Totem Pole (Prod. By Joey Cutless)

              First off, I listened to this song at least 5 times before picking up my jaw from the keyboard and giving feedback.

              Song's dope. Nothing much else to say. THP this is probably the best I've heard your flow. There were no awkward moments where you sounded like you were struggling to fit a line in, it was all just smooth. Only thing I didn't like was the Sweater Crew line....too much silence in between. FTP your verse was equally as dope except there were points where you only had one line starting a rhyme, then switched to a whole different rhyme scheme in the next line, and it kinda threw off the vibe but since you used multis, it somewhat worked out.

              Overall, great song. Good job my nigs. 4.5/5

              What's A Goon To A Willem Dafoe.

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              • #8
                Re: Mr. FTP x Noble - Totem Pole (Prod. By Joey Cutless)

                pretty fire song guys. suprised ftp came harder wit the flow but both of you guys went in. what was the robot voice saying in the backround randomly? sounds like a producer tag.

                YELLOW DUCK MUTHAFUCKA!!!!!!!!!!!

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                • #9
                  Re: Mr. FTP x Noble - Totem Pole (Prod. By Joey Cutless)

                  Originally posted by lilchukieforeheadbig View Post
                  pretty fire song guys. suprised ftp came harder wit the flow but both of you guys went in. what was the robot voice saying in the backround randomly? sounds like a producer tag.
                  Preciate that fam! It was just the "hook" it was saying "Futuristic" There isn't any tags on this beat, I leased it

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                  • #10
                    Re: Mr. FTP x Noble - Totem Pole (Prod. By Joey Cutless)

                    Thanks for the feedback everyone!



                    protect dunston at all costs

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                    • #11
                      Re: Mr. FTP x Noble - Totem Pole (Prod. By Joey Cutless)

                      I dont really like the beat, well maybe just that futuristic tag in the back ground. Guess you had no control over that but I think that took away from the song.

                      Noble: Your flow was definitely on point in this, but I feel like you slacked off on your lyrics on this. I'm used to get at least a few bars from you that I make me take a deeper listen, but this verse lacked that. Although that Glee line was pretty good. The lyrics weren't terrible, I'm just used to a little better from you. That sweater crew line couldve been worked out better, seemed rushed. Liked the adolf line too btw.

                      FTP: You came in killin with the flow, you've gotten so much better since I first started hearing your music. Little bit of choppin in the verse. Your lyrics really helped bring your flow to the forefront. All the multis and the rhyme scheme brought that bounce to it. No real complaints about you man.

                      Great track guys.

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                      • #12
                        Re: Mr. FTP x Noble - Totem Pole (Prod. By Joey Cutless)

                        Damn, ya both killed it!

                        This is on some other level shit tbh. Sounds dope, beats cool too. Swag and the different flow, LUV IT!

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