Dilemma - Ayo Remix

[DilemmaHipHop]

Whaddup its Dilemma with a new verse for yall to peep, this time I got on the beat of "Ayo" by Joe Budden feat. Emanny, which is also used for Tsu Surf's "Cocaine Paradise". Both heaters. So heres the direction I took this in ;

Dilemma - Ayo (Joe Budden Feat. Emanny/Tsu Surf Remix) - YouTube

Let me kno if youre feelin it, or if youre not. Links to websites you can check me out on are in the vids description, plus a download link and the lyrics. Thanks in advance. Also check out my remix of Waynes 'She Will' and Masta Ace's 'Nostalgia' on my channel.

Feedback;
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-untitled.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...freestyle.html

[mykill]

Re: Dilemma - Ayo Remix

Flow: A-
Lyrics: A

Overall: 4/5, Work on your presence on the mic. Kind of sound flat on your delivery, but the words are solid. Remind me of Broc that drops stuff on here. Mastering sounds good, but quality of the track might need some fine tuning. That "sands of time to milestones" line was pretty hot. Give this guy some more feed people. He's pretty dope.

Mykill co-sign

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Vocals sound great on that "She Will" freestyle. Keep doing it that way maybe.

[DilemmaHipHop]

Re: Dilemma - Ayo Remix

Great feedback homie, appreciate it. The funny thing is this Ayo joint was made on Logic Pro, which i recently got, and that She Will was made on a cheap program called Magix Music Maker, which is way simpler to use, you just the throw the effects on basically. Once i really figure out mixing in Logic the mixes will be way better than any of these. And i do deliver in a monotone way, I think it comes from comin up bumpin Gang Starr, Jay Z, etc. lol, but they pull it off better than I do. Ima def work on my presence. Again, great feedback, tips like that really help me out. Any more feedback yall ?

[Checkmatemuzick]

Re: Dilemma - Ayo Remix

Dope track but I agree wit MyKill I love wat your saying but your delivery is flat but i'm still fuckn wit you #iSupportGoodshit #keepgoin
Flow: B
Beat: B
Lryics: A

[DilemmaHipHop]

Re: Dilemma - Ayo Remix

Appreciate it fam. Im droppin somethin tmrw, bout to record in a few, so Ill post it here and yall can let me know if its improved.

[Cli-City]

Re: Dilemma - Ayo Remix

Great Track Bro! I can see you are focusing on your lyrics and that a great thing to see.Great lyrics but they could've been delivered a bit better. I heard the beat change around 1:16 and I expected you to really dig deep but it didn't happen. Other than the delivery of the lyrics, you did a pretty good job. You stayed on subject and you made your lyrics complex enough that it'd sound dope and not too simple and watered down. Great instrumental. If there were a download link, I would give this a download...Pretty Dope....Pretty Dope....Good Job Dilem

[DilemmaHipHop]

Re: Dilemma - Ayo Remix

Yea man above all Im working on my pen game, but I'm going to try to address my delivery on these upcoming releases, so look out. And there is a download link man, just go to "view more" in the description, I include a dl link and lyrics for all of my tracks

[Gibbsy]

Re: Dilemma - Ayo Remix

beat is fire!! your voice is good for rap man!! but delivery is kinda dull, flow is fire!!
you rocked this beat nicely man but there is certain bars that you could put more emotion behind, Lyrically this is tight man

4.5/5 keep dropping this man!!

[DilemmaHipHop]

Re: Dilemma - Ayo Remix

Thanks brotha, Good feedback. Check my other tracks and also my pages in the vid descriptions to keep up with new releases

[DatWeezy]

Re: Dilemma - Ayo Remix

Feeling this track. Really diggin your lyrics and the way you flowed, but the way you delivered was just a little off. Keep em coming homie. You got great potential.

[DilemmaHipHop]

Re: Dilemma - Ayo Remix

Thanks a lot, you guys are def right the delivery wasn't my best on this one, and without that feedback i may have never noticed, thats why forums like this are cool. Check out my other tracks and my fanpages if you get the chance !

[DeezyMac]

Re: Dilemma - Ayo Remix

Music like this isn't really my type but shit I can't help but play this a couple times and still feel the vibes each time. "we aint fam just cause we touch hands" that line is what really got me into it. It's some real shit, and some shit people can relate to. The whole song is. This is nice. Real nice. Only thing I didn't really like was the December line because it's been said so many times by so many people, but otherwise, this gets a solid A from me.