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First thing I noticed Vocals needs to be turned up a bit bro…
Beat is funky as hell, I can’t lie, its dope….
1st Verse: Lyrics department could use some work but they weren’t bad just not great….Flow was the best part, your starting to sound comfortable rapping and that a very good thing
“Have them waiting for my tracks like there is paint drying” – Dope Line
2nd Verse: Flow started great but fell off during the verse the got back to great. I never heard you spit but you got potential.. Forreal nigga good verse. Lyrics are good but not great….but and overall dope verse
“No one could follow my footsteps no not even my shadow”- Dope Ass Line
Overall Dope Song…Beat is the best part to be honest…I would’ve love to hear a hook that shit would’ve made the song more complete….but the beat….head nodding for sure
First thing I noticed Vocals needs to be turned up a bit bro…
Beat is funky as hell, I can’t lie, its dope….
1st Verse: Lyrics department could use some work but they weren’t bad just not great….Flow was the best part, your starting to sound comfortable rapping and that a very good thing
“Have them waiting for my tracks like there is paint drying” – Dope Line
2nd Verse: Flow started great but fell off during the verse the got back to great. I never heard you spit but you got potential.. Forreal nigga good verse. Lyrics are good but not great….but and overall dope verse
“No one could follow my footsteps no not even my shadow”- Dope Ass Line
Overall Dope Song…Beat is the best part to be honest…I would’ve love to hear a hook that shit would’ve made the song more complete….but the beat….head nodding for sure
is THP just two dudes????
I listened to this on like 4 different speakers and it sounds nice to me, hmmm. But yeah, I like that line too. It went with the line about "My songs being smooth as shit" too! 2nd verse is J$. It's just me and heard. You probably heard him on "WANT" as well. Appreciate the feedback.
as far as I can tell for me ur one of those artists that you completely respect but just cant seem to get into if u know what i mean. like i love ur flow, presence, always hav sick beats etc. but for some reason i dont love you as an artist. this isnt disrespect at all tho bro cuz i see ur hustle and that ur into this shit and gettin good at it. 4/5 but still....
Originally posted by ThaMothafuckinCarterView Post
as far as I can tell for me ur one of those artists that you completely respect but just cant seem to get into if u know what i mean. like i love ur flow, presence, always hav sick beats etc. but for some reason i dont love you as an artist. this isnt disrespect at all tho bro cuz i see ur hustle and that ur into this shit and gettin good at it. 4/5 but still....
Not sure how to take that, but thanks lol.
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meant as a compliment tbh. i just mean that i see how good u are but cant get into the music. basically instead of hating im recognizing ur skills but not being a fan at the same time. idk im confusing myself haha
I fuks wit dis right here! #1 u really can't go wrong wit JJ on the beat! but propz on ya beat selection def one of his hardest beats #2 i fuk wit the lyrics ya'll was goin the fuck in on dis beat #3 the only bad thing i can say is the vocals was kinda low but other den dat #goodshit #keepgoin
Originally posted by ThaMothafuckinCarterView Post
meant as a compliment tbh. i just mean that i see how good u are but cant get into the music. basically instead of hating im recognizing ur skills but not being a fan at the same time. idk im confusing myself haha
Nah I get what you mean. I just don't know how to respond when someone says they can't get into my music lol. Like there's nothing I can do about it I guess. Well keep checking out my music homie, hope you'll dig something in the future.
I fuks wit dis right here! #1 u really can't go wrong wit JJ on the beat! but propz on ya beat selection def one of his hardest beats #2 i fuk wit the lyrics ya'll was goin the fuck in on dis beat #3 the only bad thing i can say is the vocals was kinda low but other den dat #goodshit #keepgoin
Thanks homie. I fux with your music too. Appreciate the listen bruh!
A bit too generic of topic for a beat this cool but it's a given to do these. The lyrics were your own style for the most part. End of your 2nd verse was drawn out too much. I really think you should try a radically different delivery once in a while just to experiment. Keep it up man.
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