Checkmate - H.A.M Freestyle

[Checkmatemuzick]

B4 I start postin this new music I been recording I wanted to show ya'll how I get down on the freestyle tip. THIS IS A REAL FREESTYLE = NO PEN NO PAPER! Just hopped in the booth like "COVER ME...I'M GOIN IN" LOL

H.A.M Freestyle
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[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Checkmate - H.A.M Freestyle

You're too dope to be overlooked like this with no feedback, I got you g. Only doing feedback on your verse though!

Flow - Dope and smooth as fuck. Good flow to execute nicely while going off the top. Well done.
Lyrics - Ill, off the top or not!
Other - Mastering was tooooo on point!
Overall - 4/5, keep it up my g!

[Tha Professor]

Re: Checkmate - H.A.M Freestyle

Flow sounds smooth, but the mixing, why did you put your vocal tracks all the way to the LEFT and the RIGHT throughout the song? I think it bothers me a little bit cuz i am listening to this shit wit my headphones. My suggestion would be to do that shit at the end of some you lines (a lot of rappers do that).

Other than that, dope freestyle, also the 2nd guy

3/5

[kryspy]

Re: Checkmate - H.A.M Freestyle

I agree with Tha Professor..but you got some tight lyrics tho! I feel the gutta through y'all voice. Keep doing y'all thang!
3.8/5

[Gibbsy]

Re: Checkmate - H.A.M Freestyle

Beat is tight!!

Flow is on point, i dig hip hop like this it sounds kinda mainstream but sounds diff to most mainstream stuff plus for a freestyle this is hot !! i kinda get reminded of ThreeSixMafia when i listen to this for some reason lol
i rate this for real, but theres something about the libs i ent sureabout like they sound delayed a lil bit :S i dno
but overall 4/5!!

[ThaMothafuckinCarter]

Re: Checkmate - H.A.M Freestyle

daaamn checkmate goin in. im startin to become a legit fan bro. checkmate's a #problem

[DatWeezy]

Re: Checkmate - H.A.M Freestyle

I'm really digging this bro. Flow is tight and your lyrics pretty dope. Keep it coming man!

[DeezyMac]

Re: Checkmate - H.A.M Freestyle

My nigga! Most people's definition of freestyle is "no topic, but still written." But this, this was a legit freestyle? You could have fooled me...shit sounds so smooth like it was rehearsed. That's definitely the true sign of a good emcee when they can freestyle THIS good. Like my nigga Noble said, you are way too good to be overlooked. I'm glad niggas on here is starting to fuck with you.

Shit I know when I freestyle, I can't keep up with multi-syllable rhyming but you kept it consistent the whole verse. I have nothing negative to say about this at all. Listen three times looking for something to critique, but I just can't lol. A+

[darkoutsider]

Re: Checkmate - H.A.M Freestyle

Yeah sounds good. The mix needs a bit of work but the beat was tight and the flow was solid.

[rookies]

Re: Checkmate - H.A.M Freestyle

This some tight shit. One of the best songs i've heard on here. You need to get out and start bookin some shows. You done any yet?
Overall: 4.8/5

[cg.]

Re: Checkmate - H.A.M Freestyle

DOPE. 4/5
Nothing else to say.

[pgathriller]

Re: Checkmate - H.A.M Freestyle

Pretty dope man, I'm diggin the doubling you got going on with your vocals, but imo you should try just using the doubling on the last couple words of each line or even every other line as a subtle accentuation. Double check your levels too because the vocals sound like they're peaking (more so on the second guy) or being pushed a little too hard and slightly distorting which takes a bit of energy away from the track. This is still a solid freestyle though man, nice work!