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    Well, we are working on our mixtape and i was jus listening to beats and caught this one. Not going to throw this on the tape but it does mean something to me because it came from the heart. Let me know what you think!?

    LimeLinx - Preview - WhenImGone.mp3


    Lyrics:

    Verse 1:
    Looking in the mirror asking myself why, why, trevor why do you keep making yourself cry,
    I don’t know but I really need you here by my side,
    but I yell and scream that I want to leave this world tonight,
    nothings making sense and my brain is exploding
    and I keep showing feelins I don’t wanna keep exposing,
    everybody is watching me trying to guess whats next,
    keep talking and next is the rope around my neck,
    can’t take the pressure see im diving in too deep
    and I don’t plan on coming up see im drowning in defeat,
    my dreams are really vivid I don’t wanna re live it, but I try and try again but I can’t seem to rid it,
    and I question myself if how I feel is even real,
    cause I’ve lived life guessin now my brain is being slowly peeled,
    lay my head down and grab the gun, put it to my brain and watch the blood slowly run..

    Verse 2:
    Now im sitting back can’t stop dreaming bout my dad,
    cause he left when I was little and momma said he’s bad,
    i don’t really get it and I could never understand
    how you can have 2 kids leave and then call yourself a man,
    I ain’t never seen him and I don’t think I ever wanna,
    matter fact, I don’t think im ever fuckin gonna,
    cause I don’t want to get involved in all that fuckin drama,
    plus my momma remarried and you know I call him poppa,
    and my sister sometimes sees him but that I never bought
    cuz he promised her shit that she never fucking got,
    and it let her down, which made me hurt inside it made me cry,
    but I couldn’t let her know cuz inside she’d freakin die,
    so we keep our heads up, and look forward,
    but I still look back at all of his pictures when I'm bored,
    and I look just like him and I don’t really think its fair,
    but there is no way I can let him know I care..

    Verse 3:

    Bleeding from the inside out I don’t know what to do,
    cause the questions im asking no one has the answers too,
    it’s all a blur don’t think I can’t live another second,
    I might as well shoot myself and pray I go to heaven,
    but I don’t know if I’ll make it, haven’t made the right choices
    and when I sleep at night all I hear are these voices,
    trevor we can make you, the devil can create you,
    give you money and help make you famous too,
    no I don’t want it please just let me be,
    i wanna be myself but I’m trapped inside these dreams,
    there’s no runnin now, there is no turning back,
    the devil started talking and I was flirting back,
    trapped inside this bubble and I just want to leave,
    please, im screaming, please jus let me be,
    I don’t want it, please don’t make me do it I don’t wanna go through it,
    please go, don’t make me do it,
    I don’t want to play this game, yea I get the fame,
    but nothings worth giving up for all the pain you will gain,
    and nothings really making sense my life is going numb,
    can’t feel love, and I have a feeling this has just begun,
    so I grab the gun and aim at at heart tell myself don’t do it my life just start,
    tear my life apart, I tear my life to pieces, but somehow I jus keep fuggin breathing,


    Feed Links:

    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post702205

    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post702206
    Last edited by DatWeezy; 10-25-2011, 01:29 AM. Reason: Added Lyrics:

  • #2
    Re: When I'm Gone - Lil Trev

    Damn, no feed? Need some guys!

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    • #3
      Re: When I'm Gone - Lil Trev

      Wow.......those lyrics are just dope as fuck!

      Probs to the fullest man!

      Realest shit I ever saw in this studio tbh.

      Real talk too
      Originally posted by Shake
      Why so negative all the time???

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      • #4
        Re: When I'm Gone - Lil Trev

        Thanks a lot man! Means a lot. More to come. I never mentioned I record on a rock band Mic. Buying a new good one next week I think!

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        • #5
          Re: When I'm Gone - Lil Trev

          Good luck with that
          Originally posted by Shake
          Why so negative all the time???

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          • #6
            Originally posted by Vocker View Post
            Good luck with that
            Ha thanks!

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            • #7
              Re: When I'm Gone - Lil Trev

              Originally posted by DatWeezy View Post
              Thanks a lot man! Means a lot. More to come. I never mentioned I record on a rock band Mic. Buying a new good one next week I think!
              Yea I remember I used to record with a rock band mic haha..But you're lyrics are on point. You could tell it came from your heart. Props. Once you get a decent mic, and a pop filter, I'm sure you're gonna get a lot better. I'm not saying you're bad, but it's just that the mic & the recording program are tools that take a lot of time to master the equipment. Just keep recording and experimenting. I'm lookin' forward to hearing more.
              Lyrics: A-
              Flow: C+
              Overall: B


              "I stole a Bible, is that a sin"?

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              • #8
                Re: When I'm Gone - Lil Trev

                I LIKE THIS ALOT!....there are flaws flow wise....but the realness of this song is cool...Its dope....

                I actually have a song I'm writing that when I get a mic i need you to get on because its an honest song..like this one..
                Mississippi x California x North Carolina



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                • #9
                  Re: When I'm Gone - Lil Trev

                  Originally posted by Cli-City View Post
                  I LIKE THIS ALOT!....there are flaws flow wise....but the realness of this song is cool...Its dope....

                  I actually have a song I'm writing that when I get a mic i need you to get on because its an honest song..like this one..
                  Thanks man! And yea just hit me up either here or on twitter : @Trev_Da_Dj when u get the mic jus send me over the beat man. Looking foward to it!

                  ---------- Post added at 08:38 PM ---------- Previous post was at 08:37 PM ----------

                  Originally posted by kryspy View Post
                  Yea I remember I used to record with a rock band mic haha..But you're lyrics are on point. You could tell it came from your heart. Props. Once you get a decent mic, and a pop filter, I'm sure you're gonna get a lot better. I'm not saying you're bad, but it's just that the mic & the recording program are tools that take a lot of time to master the equipment. Just keep recording and experimenting. I'm lookin' forward to hearing more.
                  Lyrics: A-
                  Flow: C+
                  Overall: B
                  Thanks man. And yea I don't really know what program I need to get it (Don't have a Mac) ..Right now im just using Audacity because it is free haha. Thanks for the feed man !

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                  • #10
                    Re: When I'm Gone - Lil Trev

                    Lyrically pretty dope man !! but truth is tackling an eminem beat isnt something i would reccommend any artist doing, you cant add anything to a beat that em's ripped tbh....quality is Okay, not great but okay, you ent backing your bars up i cant hear any adlibs or anything but maybe thats just how you make tracks ? flow is decent thoughout

                    3/5 keep dropping man !


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                    • #11
                      Re: When I'm Gone - Lil Trev

                      Originally posted by Gibbsy View Post
                      Lyrically pretty dope man !! but truth is tackling an eminem beat isnt something i would reccommend any artist doing, you cant add anything to a beat that em's ripped tbh....quality is Okay, not great but okay, you ent backing your bars up i cant hear any adlibs or anything but maybe thats just how you make tracks ? flow is decent thoughout

                      3/5 keep dropping man !
                      Thanks for the feed man. And yea remixing any eminem song isn't really a good thing. I just thought, i got some real shit to say, so why not an eminem beat. Yea, I record on a rock band mic so my quality isn't good haha... thanks for the feed man! And what you mean by backing my bars up and adlibs? I usually do, but it's kind of hard when rapping something real you know?

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