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  • Noble - Nightmares Of The Bottom (Freestyle)

    High as fuck and drunk. Just a lil' verse. Fux with it.

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    Re: Noble - Nightmares Of The Bottom (Freestyle)

    It has its highes and lows tbh.

    Overall it's a lil under average, but I still like it.

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    • #3
      Re: Noble - Nightmares Of The Bottom (Freestyle)

      "All about a dollar, my opinions makin hella sense (cents)" Dopee. I think you did really good on the song, I can dig it

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        Re: Noble - Nightmares Of The Bottom (Freestyle)

        Originally posted by ABjerg View Post
        It has its highes and lows tbh.

        Overall it's a lil under average, but I still like it.
        Hell yeah, not everyone gunna rock out to this one. I did no writing for it. But thanks for the listen man.

        Originally posted by epeezy View Post
        "All about a dollar, my opinions makin hella sense (cents)" Dopee. I think you did really good on the song, I can dig it
        Thanks my dude.



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        • #5
          Re: Noble - Nightmares Of The Bottom (Freestyle)

          Beat is just sickness..you come off sounding like drake or weezy on this real talk the flow is decent man, but tbh ive heard so much better from you not to say i dont rate it but not as much as your other stuff, plus do i detect some of this is written if not most of it is right ahaha decent though homie 3/5


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            Re: Noble - Nightmares Of The Bottom (Freestyle)

            Originally posted by Gibbsy View Post
            Beat is just sickness..you come off sounding like drake or weezy on this real talk the flow is decent man, but tbh ive heard so much better from you not to say i dont rate it but not as much as your other stuff, plus do i detect some of this is written if not most of it is right ahaha decent though homie 3/5
            Thanks. But none was written. I finished this song in like 15 minutes I believe. I just did like 4 lines at a time.



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            • #7
              Re: Noble - Nightmares Of The Bottom (Freestyle)

              For it being a 4/5 freestyle, I fux with it


              "I stole a Bible, is that a sin"?

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              • #8
                Re: Noble - Nightmares Of The Bottom (Freestyle)

                Flow is dope at fuck man!!! Lyrics are pretty tight too. "All about my dollar, my opinions making hella sense" line was what locked me in at the beginning.. keep em coming man!

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                  Re: Noble - Nightmares Of The Bottom (Freestyle)

                  Originally posted by kryspy View Post
                  For it being a 4/5 freestyle, I fux with it
                  Originally posted by DatWeezy View Post
                  Flow is dope at fuck man!!! Lyrics are pretty tight too. "All about my dollar, my opinions making hella sense" line was what locked me in at the beginning.. keep em coming man!

                  Appreciate it y'all!



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                  • #10
                    Re: Noble - Nightmares Of The Bottom (Freestyle)

                    "Bitch I'm selfmade, went from no money to well paid, made all the right moves what you call that? Well played" - Real ass set of bars...and that is why i fucks with them..VERY DOPE!

                    7.5/10....Had some ups and downs flow wise but overall a good job.

                    Lyrics: I can tell you are concentrating on making your lyrics more detailed and focused...which is a good..
                    Delivery: Always your strongest area to me, and its because you are always sounding more comfortable with every track....some slip ups but overall a good job

                    I would like to hear you experiment with your voice...You know how some rappers sound more gritty on some songs and deeper on some...this song doesn't need that but I thought I would mention that......

                    Beat is dope also, who produced this???
                    Mississippi x California x North Carolina



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                    • #11
                      Re: Noble - Nightmares Of The Bottom (Freestyle)

                      Originally posted by Cli-City View Post
                      "Bitch I'm selfmade, went from no money to well paid, made all the right moves what you call that? Well played" - Real ass set of bars...and that is why i fucks with them..VERY DOPE!

                      7.5/10....Had some ups and downs flow wise but overall a good job.

                      Lyrics: I can tell you are concentrating on making your lyrics more detailed and focused...which is a good..
                      Delivery: Always your strongest area to me, and its because you are always sounding more comfortable with every track....some slip ups but overall a good job

                      I would like to hear you experiment with your voice...You know how some rappers sound more gritty on some songs and deeper on some...this song doesn't need that but I thought I would mention that......

                      Beat is dope also, who produced this???
                      Hell yeah. I think I had some good lines for how quick I did the song. But thanks bruh.


                      And I don't know who produced it....



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                      • #12
                        Re: Noble - Nightmares Of The Bottom (Freestyle)

                        this is pretty dope bro, a lot better than what I expected to be honested. Good lyrics and good lyrics, Ur delivery was tight too. Keep it up man.

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