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  • Mr. Wrong Freestyle

    Mr. Right transformed into Mr. Wrong
    Hopefully what I say doesn’t come out wrong
    Anyone can be winners, it’s a free-for-all
    Spitting from the heart
    Life decided to tear us apart
    ... If love is a game, let me hit restart
    Because this isn’t funny love’s the worst pain
    I had nothing to lose, but everything to gain
    Without a heart I can’t maintain shit I’m about to go insane
    I knew love was never fair
    I ignored the sign on you saying ‘Beware’
    I lost you know I see you walking around, the new you
    Waiting on that moment that you will come through
    You’re over me that is the honest truth
    I'm spitting from the heart I’m not done till I’m overdone
    I’m going back to me when you’re out of my head but that’s all easier said than done
    I’m alright though but to some heartaches as worse as death from a thousand cuts
    Everything’s numb to me so when all is said and done I’ll still be leaving the room with a buzz.



    Leave some feedback and advice maybe a rate?
    One Hit Wonders 300M
    *I'm like, how can i leave her? love is a bitch, but everybody need her.- Weezy*
    Loving and breathing music till the death of me.

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    Re: Mr. Wrong Freestyle

    We need to bring this part of the forums to life.
    One Hit Wonders 300M
    *I'm like, how can i leave her? love is a bitch, but everybody need her.- Weezy*
    Loving and breathing music till the death of me.

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    • #3
      Re: Mr. Wrong Freestyle

      Not bad at all. A little sappy but then again it is about a girl so that's fine. I like the way u finished it about leaving the room with a buzz. Advice wise ... Same thing I tell a lot of people on here. Find slicker ways of saying it cuz u got the right idea but the actual lines need to be polished up


      Crate my shit http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/wri...tml#post725293

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