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Ok here we are tried workin on my voice like you guys suggested and worked on my multis and overall lyrics. my verse over the beat for the Shady 2.0 cypher read the lyrics i think it helps see my improvement on this one. also this my first song with two verses 
Hulkshare.com Shady 2.0.mp3
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Hi rihanna is Royce still watchin you?
I bet he got that telescope along with the rest of shady 2
Bye rihanna cuz im not gonna spend my whole verse talking something that aint true
Your rhymes too old don’t let em spoil
Ya flow so slow like tryna watch water boil
Ya career? Whats that? as steady as the price of oil
You try to write, nah man you just toil
like tryna build a house in the soil made of foil
man u know im royal, all my minions stay loyal
I chew you out like skoal or skoal or whatever.
They say u never gon sign? never say never
like drizzy drake im wearin my crewneck sweater
My rhymes knockout your lights like I just pulled a lever
When I rhyme I intertwine like a spider web in time
Im on a rapid climb like crime nighttime
girl u know im fine, and if u don’t believe how
ill turn the temp to right bout 69 degrees now
you on the fine line of bein on dateline NBC
No big concern. Ill go hit that mpc
And make all my beats the ways its supposed to be
Now don’t you see, im just bein me
Workin harder than a bee that lost his honey…gotta go back to the tree
Was that corny? Well I don’t believe, its just a figure of speech used to to put emphases
On the fact that im just murderin these beats and settin them free
Like moses sayin to the king: let my people be
I cud do this shit forever, cuz im to fuckin clever
Erry is rap an endeavour, wanna stay, well whatever.
I got some bars left to sever the beat
Like a fuckin marathon im running the street
Your welcome for the rhyme reckon its about time
That I leave yall people with a treat
Like a dog with raw meat, I rip this beat
Now I put yall to sleep, time to count some sheep
Why so shy, why so meek
now Ur my prisoner so don’t make a peep
or else I leave you on ur feet
10 seconds to run fore I shoot you down
I shoot u in the middle of town
throw u in the ocean “well I guess he drowned”
no evidence: harry potter got my invisibility gown
Hulkshare.com Shady 2.0.mp3
Feedback:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...freestyle.html
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Hi rihanna is Royce still watchin you?
I bet he got that telescope along with the rest of shady 2
Bye rihanna cuz im not gonna spend my whole verse talking something that aint true
Your rhymes too old don’t let em spoil
Ya flow so slow like tryna watch water boil
Ya career? Whats that? as steady as the price of oil
You try to write, nah man you just toil
like tryna build a house in the soil made of foil
man u know im royal, all my minions stay loyal
I chew you out like skoal or skoal or whatever.
They say u never gon sign? never say never
like drizzy drake im wearin my crewneck sweater
My rhymes knockout your lights like I just pulled a lever
When I rhyme I intertwine like a spider web in time
Im on a rapid climb like crime nighttime
girl u know im fine, and if u don’t believe how
ill turn the temp to right bout 69 degrees now
you on the fine line of bein on dateline NBC
No big concern. Ill go hit that mpc
And make all my beats the ways its supposed to be
Now don’t you see, im just bein me
Workin harder than a bee that lost his honey…gotta go back to the tree
Was that corny? Well I don’t believe, its just a figure of speech used to to put emphases
On the fact that im just murderin these beats and settin them free
Like moses sayin to the king: let my people be
I cud do this shit forever, cuz im to fuckin clever
Erry is rap an endeavour, wanna stay, well whatever.
I got some bars left to sever the beat
Like a fuckin marathon im running the street
Your welcome for the rhyme reckon its about time
That I leave yall people with a treat
Like a dog with raw meat, I rip this beat
Now I put yall to sleep, time to count some sheep
Why so shy, why so meek
now Ur my prisoner so don’t make a peep
or else I leave you on ur feet
10 seconds to run fore I shoot you down
I shoot u in the middle of town
throw u in the ocean “well I guess he drowned”
no evidence: harry potter got my invisibility gown
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