Poyo - Ima Boss Freestyle

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Poyo - Im A Boss Freestyle - YouTube

Tell me what you think this my very first song i recorded so im still gettin a feel for this rap shit but think this ones a banger lol. tell me what you think, also if you have any suggestion on good program to record in ill appreciate it

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http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...eplace-it.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ack-track.html

[Gibbsy]

Re: Poyo - Ima Boss Freestyle

ight man not to bad, spesh for a first track, but one thing i will say is work on how your putting bars together man, i used to have the exsact same issue man, your bars are like all over the place, you need to focus on that, so it flows alot better read some poetry or listen to some hip hop thats well known, old school stuff will help with this but not bad man, keep at it

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Re: Poyo - Ima Boss Freestyle

u sound like that guy kryspy that posts here in the studio, but different swag than him.

[ThaMothafuckinCarter]

Re: Poyo - Ima Boss Freestyle

stay focused man i can tell u havnt been rappin very long. i've only been rappin about 2 months myself. anyways i like the swag u have on the track hit me up if u ever wanna collab im always down

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Ima Boss Freestyle

stay focused man i can tell u havnt been rappin very long. i've only been rappin about 2 months myself. anyways i like the swag u have on the track hit me up if u ever wanna collab im always down

Thanks bro, we all gotta start somewhere lol. and most def we need to collab im down with anybody who show me love lol. just send me a beat if you have anything in mind. let me hear some of your tracks send some links over

[DatWeezy]

Re: Poyo - Ima Boss Freestyle

You REALLY need to concentrate on flow man. I used to be in the same situation. Your bars aren't bad, but they are not great. Also, when your on the Mic you got to feel yourself and be comfortable with what your saying. Keep up man, you'll get there!

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Ima Boss Freestyle

ight man not to bad, spesh for a first track, but one thing i will say is work on how your putting bars together man, i used to have the exsact same issue man, your bars are like all over the place, you need to focus on that, so it flows alot better read some poetry or listen to some hip hop thats well known, old school stuff will help with this but not bad man, keep at it

yeah i know what you mean with the bars being everywhere on this type of track i dont think it really matters, thanks on the feedback. you gotta link to your mixtape ?

[ThaMothafuckinCarter]

Re: Poyo - Ima Boss Freestyle

Thanks bro, we all gotta start somewhere lol. and most def we need to collab im down with anybody who show me love lol. just send me a beat if you have anything in mind. let me hear some of your tracks send some links over

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tto-remix.html ---im the second verse
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...emix-merc.html ---my shady cypher verses

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Poyo - Ima Boss Freestyle

Flow - Flow could've been executed much better.
Lyrics - Nothing great, no complaints though.
Other - Been wanting to hop on this beat... hmmm... Nice for your first song, keep posting your future songs.
Overall - 3/5.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Ima Boss Freestyle

Flow - Flow could've been executed much better.
Lyrics - Nothing great, no complaints though.
Other - Been wanting to hop on this beat... hmmm... Nice for your first song, keep posting your future songs.
Overall - 3/5.

Can you elaborate a lil bit more on the floor. thanks for the input. on droppin my on my level freestyle this weekend

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Poyo - Ima Boss Freestyle

Can you elaborate a lil bit more on the floor. thanks for the input. on droppin my on my level freestyle this weekend

With the flow, I meant like.... You could enunciate your words to make a few lines flow better or added an extra small word or two to make it flow better. The flow wasn't bad, just felt it could've been polished better...

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Ima Boss Freestyle

I know what you mean, ima work on that