Mixtape: Greatness In The Making -- Lil Trev & Josh Earl

[DatWeezy]

Finally it's here. Our first ever Mixtape! Greatness In The Making

Recorded on a Rock Band Mic, in the middle of my room. Not the best quality, but we worked hard on it and i'm proud of it. Check it please and download if you like. Feed as well! Love Ya'll!!!

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Lil Trev & Josh Earl - Greatness In The Making // Free Mixtape @ DatPiff.com





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[DatWeezy]

Re: Mixtape: Greatness In The Making -- Lil Trev & Josh Earl

No feeeeeeddd? :/

[Gibbsy]

Re: Mixtape: Greatness In The Making -- Lil Trev & Josh Earl

Okay ill try nt to long the feed out,

listening to about 1 min of each of the tracks one thing i will say is most of your tracks you have to work on your delivery homie, like your bars are pretty good an you flow well on most of the tracks tbh, but the delivery of both of guys spittin needs improvement,

now you both can rap fo' real, lyrics are pretty good too on most of the tracks, and the flows are good but very similiar thoughout the mixtape,Lost ones is deffo my fav track on the album!!

Nice work though yall, keep going at it !! (only bad thing i can say is the delievery on most ,NOT ALL but most of the tracks needs improvement )

3.5/5 for the tape yall overall not bad work though its a decent project

[pgathriller]

Re: Mixtape: Greatness In The Making -- Lil Trev & Josh Earl

You've got a nice energy, not over the top but not lazy; I like it. One thing I think that could really help accentuate your vocals is some nice doubling and adlibs to really give your vocals some more presence in places. Vocals sound a bit muddy and the volume fluctuates a bit-try looking into some compression to keep a stronger maintain on your vocal level throughout. it will help even out the volumes of louder and softer phrases and keep everyone more concise.

keep at it man!

[DatWeezy]

Re: Mixtape: Greatness In The Making -- Lil Trev & Josh Earl

Okay ill try nt to long the feed out,

listening to about 1 min of each of the tracks one thing i will say is most of your tracks you have to work on your delivery homie, like your bars are pretty good an you flow well on most of the tracks tbh, but the delivery of both of guys spittin needs improvement,

now you both can rap fo' real, lyrics are pretty good too on most of the tracks, and the flows are good but very similiar thoughout the mixtape,Lost ones is deffo my fav track on the album!!

Nice work though yall, keep going at it !! (only bad thing i can say is the delievery on most ,NOT ALL but most of the tracks needs improvement )

3.5/5 for the tape yall overall not bad work though its a decent project

Thanks for the feed man! Yea, i need to work on my delivery and that is next. and yea Lost Ones has some emotion to it I thought. Really appreciate the feed my man!

---------- Post added at 10:31 PM ---------- Previous post was at 10:30 PM ----------

You've got a nice energy, not over the top but not lazy; I like it. One thing I think that could really help accentuate your vocals is some nice doubling and adlibs to really give your vocals some more presence in places. Vocals sound a bit muddy and the volume fluctuates a bit-try looking into some compression to keep a stronger maintain on your vocal level throughout. it will help even out the volumes of louder and softer phrases and keep everyone more concise.

keep at it man!

Thanks for the feed my dude! and yea, adlibs i need to add and the vocals sound kind of muddy at times because we're recording on a Rock Band mic until we get our new ones for Christmas. Thanks again though for the feed. What's your fav song?