Poyo - Nikes On My Feet Freestyle

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Poyo - Nikes On My Feet Freestyle - YouTube

heard this beat last night for the time when i heard DatWeezy spit over it, and i thought it was dope so i dropped a verse. i played with the shoe theme throughout the song had to show off a lil lol, tell me what yall think.


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[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Poyo - Nikes On My Feet Freestyle

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[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Nikes On My Feet Freestyle

i edited it lol, any feedback

[RaYZoR]

Re: Poyo - Nikes On My Feet Freestyle

First off good beat to freestyle too. I feel like this was written. So its not a freestyle.
But yeah, the part where you stretch the words out a bit..sounds well...awkward.
It was a nice quick verse tho. "Sneaker game is better than most niggaz is"
my favorite line in the remix.

Hope to here from you in near future.

Lyrics 4/5
Flow 4/5

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Nikes On My Feet Freestyle

I actually liked when I stretched the words lol, but thanks on the feedback I appreciate it. Im striving to be the best I can, one track at a time. Im releasing my next track tonight featuring my two brothers called dungeon, its over this young money beat

[@TygaHQ]

Re: Poyo - Nikes On My Feet Freestyle

Dope!
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[Cli-City]

Re: Poyo - Nikes On My Feet Freestyle

Voice is wack...sorry.....and the way you pronounce nigga like "nigger" sounds weird....
Ok aside from that....your lyrics are good..good flow...and you stuck to the subject really well...I fucks with that....
Beat you chose was dope too had an old school vibe to it..which I always love...
Delivery needs to improve...as I said earlier..how you pronounce words and your voice sounds like a junior high school student..so its hard
to believe what your saying.....

Overall 3/5

[TupacShaquer]

Re: Poyo - Nikes On My Feet Freestyle

This is pretty dope .. I heard that one part you fell off though but nothing big your flow was pretty good overall
Lyrics: B+
Flow: B+
Overall 3/5 Keep doing your shit

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Nikes On My Feet Freestyle

Voice is wack...sorry.....and the way you pronounce nigga like "nigger" sounds weird....
Ok aside from that....your lyrics are good..good flow...and you stuck to the subject really well...I fucks with that....
Beat you chose was dope too had an old school vibe to it..which I always love...
Delivery needs to improve...as I said earlier..how you pronounce words and your voice sounds like a junior high school student..so its hard
to believe what your saying.....

Overall 3/5

I Know voice is different but thats why i like it its unique. all your criticism was fair. Respect.

[Late122]

Re: Poyo - Nikes On My Feet Freestyle

I'm also about to do this one The beat is so sick. Flow, nice. Add some more energy, sounds like your rapping from your noise.... if you know what I mean. If you don't know how to add energy, you can try to stand up and memorize the lines. Best advice I can give.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Nikes On My Feet Freestyle

Niggas Hating On My Voice lol but yeah since it was a more laid back track i tried to sound laid back but i guess that might have backfired lol. Get me hip once you drop your version

[@TygaHQ]

Re: Poyo - Nikes On My Feet Freestyle

Your voice sounds different than usual, but you still killed it stayed o topic, some nice lines too