Gibbsy-Rainy Day

[Gibbsy]

Yo' Mixtape out next week, wednesday !! be on the look out yall

Just need to sort my cover out and then its complete so heres a track from the mixtape, thought ide drop yall something thats definalty on it so you can tell me if you feeling the vibe im going with for the mixtape

http://hulkshare.com/j8anla36burx

Feed:

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...at-throne.html

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...s-jay-bee.html

[Young Corruption]

Re: Gibbsy-Rainy Day

Really liked the hook to start off with and i would say the first verse was the best and really picked off after you said "Now shut up cause here's the message" and the first couple of bars in the second verse were sick and everything was good. Quality is nothing bad, more practice but not a big deal and i know it may not seems like i have bad feedback but thats because your songs are my type of rap that i love to listen too so thats always a plus . Good job man and i can't wait for the mixtape

[Gibbsy]

Re: Gibbsy-Rainy Day

Bumpppppppp

[Late122]

Re: Gibbsy-Rainy Day

Lemme start off by saying I don't like that beat, Flow gets a 4/5, fits the beat nicely. Lyrics are Dope, 4.5/5 You could add some punchlines, not saying I like them but they are good if u don't overdo them. The second verse was the best, Dope flow there. Hook was nice, 4/5. Btw, You kinda remind me of B-Real Overall 4/5, Can't wait for your Mixtape!

[Gibbsy]

Re: Gibbsy-Rainy Day

Thanks man, B-real is dope so thats a compliment to me!!

and tbh im not really a punch line rapper, i dont dislike punchline rappers, just prefer to keep it different,
I mean a couple of the bars in there are as close to punchlines as i like to go, the bars like
"Gibbsy without a mic , like a whore going thru menopause,
Eating um all like zombie hoards, ive got the right like the beastie boys"

But straight up punchline bars dont really appeal in my style of rap but much respect for the feed homie!!

[mykill]

Re: Gibbsy-Rainy Day

Flow: A
Lyrics: B+

Overall: 4.25/5, There are some points where you slip up really slightly when you do that rapid fire flow. You might have been able to do something else with the chorus to make it stand out more. Like with your vocals, you use the same effects really, so to me that's become your signature. Maybe add some more layers of vocals to it and some adlibs here and there. It sounds kind of rushed too. Lyrics are great on this man. I think you've got yourself another great track under your belt. Cheers!

[Gibbsy]

Re: Gibbsy-Rainy Day

thanks homie!! appricate it man, BUMP XD i want some more feed before i drop the mixtape, ive literally only got a couple of tracks to re-record verses for and then its done

[Explicit]

Re: Gibbsy-Rainy Day

Mann, your flow has improved heaps! Flow was sick, didnt hear one time where it fell off. The lyrics were pretty cool aswell, from the title I expected a completely different track, so you surprised me on that one.
Overall this song was pretty good, no flaws. The only thing that could make it better is better quality. 9/10 man! Waiting for that mixtape!

[kapa99]

Re: Gibbsy-Rainy Day

You got a nice flow, good lyrics, and i really like the voice, dont know what else to say, just keep up the work.

[Gibbsy]

Re: Gibbsy-Rainy Day

thankyou yo' really apprciate it !

[DatWeezy]

Re: Gibbsy-Rainy Day

I like it, feels off flow at some points, but all in all this shit bangs. Ready for this tape maineee!

[Lord of Kaos]

Re: Gibbsy-Rainy Day

First time, I've listened to a track by you and I must say, I'm impressed. Shit was dope af. Can't wait to hear the mixtape bro. You only slipped up a few times but shit was still nice. 9/10 (real shit)