Kryspy - Touch You Right + Outro

[MC_Crary]

Re: Kryspy - Touch You Right + Outro

Flow on touch you right is pretty great man. I like this song alot. Mastering is on point. I even like hook. I like this better than your cypher entry.

[kryspy]

Re: Kryspy - Touch You Right + Outro

Flow on touch you right is pretty great man. I like this song alot. Mastering is on point. I even like hook. I like this better than your cypher entry.

Lol yea I didn't like my cypher entry..I barely wanted to submit it but Cli convinced me haha..I was gonna redo it but I ran out of time..but I appreciate that dawg!

[Dinho925]

Re: Kryspy - Touch You Right + Outro

The beat is really dope my dude, rhymes were on/off, more on! keep it up! - Jay Bee

[kryspy]

Re: Kryspy - Touch You Right + Outro

The beat is really dope my dude, rhymes were on/off, more on! keep it up! - Jay Bee

I preciate that homie!

[mykill]

Re: Kryspy - Touch You Right + Outro

Touch Your Right // Overall: 3.25/5
I like intro and the experimentation with the effects and what not. Flow seems to be pretty consistent throughout. Sometimes lyrically this song strays a bit.

Outro // Overall: 3/5
Flow is ok on this one. I think for an outro you should focus more on yourself with the lyrics. Again, I think one of the things you need to work on with songs is your topics and staying on topic and making the lyrics in all the verses on a song more cohesive. You remind me of Yung Famou$, a guy that use to post here a lot, with your voice. The delivery needs some tightening up too. More feeling.